Keep living for Friendship

by alejin

EMERGENCY DELAY

IM SORRY, I REALLY WAS PLANNING TO ADD 2 OR 3 MORE CHAPTERS THIS PAST WEEK, BUT

MY COUSIN LIKE SISTER WHO LIVED ALMOST ALL MY LIFE WITH ME BRENDA.... DIED 2 DAYS AGO FOR HER LONG LAST CANCER, IM SORRY IM A LITTLE SAD BY THE TIME, BUT I PROMISE I WILL PUBLISH THE NEXT CHAPTERS SOON, JUST PLEASE WAIT A LITTLE MORE.

REST IN PEACE MY COUSIN, BRENDA FAJARDO, (MI MORENITA)

Author's Note:

I JUST POST THIS AFTER SEEING SOMETHING, ONE PERSON REMOVED HIS DISLIKE AND ONE JUST ADDED ONE LIKE, I REALLY REALLY APRECIATE THAT BUT PLEASE PLEASE, IF YOU STILL DONT LIKE MY STORY, DONT HOLD YOUR DISLIKE PLEASE, I DIDNT DO THIS TO GET PITTY AND LIKES, NO, PLEASE I WILL TRY TO EARN THOSE LIKES WITH MY STORY AND THE UPCOMING CHAPTERS, BUT PLEASE DONT INSULT MY DEAREST MORENITA MEMORY WITH PITTY LIKES (im not saying you did that Amethyst blade, i did this most of all for the person who removed his dislike). THANK YOU.

Comments

[soulknight13]

Im sorry to gear take all the time you need its a blow I know just do you till your ready

[Amethyst Blade]

I will like this story to encourage you to become a better author...
Who hate me or dislike me for it can have this
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[FireWing 77]

I'm so sorry about your cousin. Take as much time as you need. I know how it feels to lose a family member.

[alejin]

4687411 Thanks man, but as my newest edited author note says, dont worry if u still dont like my story, dont hold back your dislike, i will earn your like and other likes with my story i promise, but thanks anyway. (if u like my story thanks, i only did that comment for the person who removed his dislike thats all)

[alejin]

4687447 thankyou very much

[Amethyst Blade]

4687532 Well, I see potential.
This story could be better if you refine your grammar and spelling (English is also not my native language too but I try my best to improve it because it's a requirement for any sort of job I have in mind for the future) and probably get an editor which seem like you did.
And you can refine the storyline and how you tell the story better if you have some more experience.
You might will not be at the level of thadius0 or some other authors but at least you can be much better than this.

[alejin]

4687563 dont worry i can tell you, i have already at least 10 chapters done in my notebook, i only need to edit them a little, make some draws, im taking a little time because i really dont want to make Alex a Gary Stu, yes he will have heroic acts, but not like taking a full army with super power or sort (well maybe much later he will get some kind of powers by magic or artifacts im still deciding). well thanks for the advice. (one question, i do am thinking about shipping him with somepony, who would you think could be better, i have 3 on mind, i just want to know your opinion please)

[Lunafanficsinc]

lamento mucho tu perdida de tu familiar
tarda te el tiempo necesario yo espero

[alejin]

4687903 gracias

[cam51801]

4687935
I'm sorry for your loss.

[alejin]

4696935 thanks

[SOG AVENGER 225]

She's in a better place

[I stabs you]

Im from the future i hope your fine

[JazzTheFox53rd]

4697421 Woah I know this comment is really late but I'm sorry for your lost. May she be missed but NEVER forgotten.

[SpyderBookworm]

Although this happen over a year ago I'm sorry for your loss. God took her because it was the only way to put an end to her suffering. Now is she is happy and will be even happier once she sees you again. If you just kept writing even when your cousin died I would wonder why.

[josue]

4697421 cancer is evil I hope you find the power to continue in life you will one day see her again I hope you are well