At last... The sequel of one of my favorite shipfics is finally up.
Time to stop all of my activities and focus, it's reading time !
The SunLight shimmer will always sparkle ! (yeah, that was cheesy)

Oh myyyy... Sunset? Have you and Twilight been experimenting with magic in the bedroom?
Has Twilight, perchance, wanted to try out stallion parts on an occasion or two?

Winter wrap-up, winter wrap-uupp… Oh, bloody Tartarus! Damnit, Spike!

We all have that person in our lives who will torture us in this manner. Twilight's pain is felt.

WELP

Sunset's preggers.

Commence reading! Huzzah!

Or at least her stomach seemed to think so. Her hoof tapped at it experimentally, trying to not think too hard as to why she wanted such weird combinations of food.

She can't be... that's impossible, right? Right?!

Though she did wonder herself why Big Macintosh kept ordering that Object Animation stuff...

He wants it, he needs it, obviously.

EDIT BOT, GO!
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DING!

“Ah…. no…. Mistress,”

Should be three dots for an ellipsis, Lapis.

after much conflict with one another:.They

You've put a full stop after the colon, and left no space.

Once Spike had figured out she wasn’t there to sweep Twilight away… and Sunset had grudgingly admitted that Spike, like all annoying little brothers, wasn’t going anywhere, they’d come to a mutual truce.

Hmm. This sentence could probably be re-punctuated as: "Once Spike had figured out she wasn’t there to sweep Twilight away--and Sunset had grudgingly admitted that Spike, like all annoying little brothers, wasn’t going anywhere--they’d come to a mutual truce." That errant ellipsis doesn't quite sit well where it is.

and it was ready to accept it’s first offering.

its*

intermediate-class

I don't think this needs to be hyphenated. I could be wrong, but I'm pretty sure it doesn't.

She’d be a lot further along if you weren’t prancing around the place like Rarity on fashion week yanno.

Needs a comma.

That stuff ain’t cheap, yanno. Pegasi. Oi.

I can tell you, with good authority, that "Oi" is the British call for attention. The word you're looking for as exclamation, is "Oy".
Sauce: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Oy_vey

I’ll make sure to mention it to Mistress so she can put on our to-do list tomorrow

put it*

(an art she could finally claim mastery in)

Nyeeeeehhh... you really shouldn't use parenthesis in writing, it's bad technique. Consider em-dashing this like so: "As she slid back into the lacy violet socks--an art she could finally claim mastery in--she did her best to rationalize her recent snack choices." Or just simply using commas.

and perhaps the most tedious yet mentally demanding of her chores.

This should be comma'd, like so: "and perhaps the most tedious, yet mentally demanding, of her chores."

If it had a different color or something special in it (potions had never been Sunset’s strong suit in studying magic), there was likely a clipboard Mistress had for it.

There's those dreaded parentheses again. Em-dashes all the way, brother. "If it had a different color or something special in it--potions had never been Sunset’s strong suit in studying magic--there was likely a clipboard Mistress had for it.

She set the picture and stared at it

Set the picture down*?

Liking so far. Very, very nice.

Alright, on to chapter 2...

Odd food cravings? Check.
Random mood swings? Check.
Rarity back in town? Check.

Strap in boys and girls, this ride is gonna be a good one.

Oh boy...

I get the feeling that someone might have a, ah, bun in the oven. So to speak.

~Skeeter The Lurker

three days in the fungeon

Maybe I'm not just in the know about "fungeons", as it were.

Also, it took me so long to figure it out. Between the mood swings and unusual cravings, I just couldn't piece it together. Until about 15 seconds ago. Congrats, Sunny!

We her socks now tightly strapped into place,

We her, me you

4632560 stop beating around the bush and lets just say it!

REALLY?! A PREGNANT SUNSET?! WERE GOING DOWN THIS ROAD?! WELL THIS CAN'T END BADLY AT ALL CAN IT?!?! EVERYONE TAKE COVER!! THE SHIT IS ABOUT TO HIT. THE. FAN!!!

~Eon

P.S. to much?

I'm calling it now Sunset is pregnant.

am i right? P.M. me the answer if you feel like telling.

Edit: I'm not the only one that thinks that, it seems.

I went back and tried to read the party scene, but, for the life of me, I can't remember exactly what Rarity did. From what I can piece together, she was in love with either Twilight or Sunset...

I am terribly confused. Any chance someone could fill me in?

4635508 She's in love with Twilight, but Sunset's pissed at her because A. Sunset saw Rarity as a close friend and figured Rarity would have told her if B. Rarity was living through Sunset because she loves Twilight but couldn't work up the nerve to do anything about it except C. Dress in Twilight-colored Sub clothing that would surely have been noticed by one of the pair and potentially damage SunLight's relationship.

4632949 Fungeon. A fun dungeon. See: King Candy, Wreck-it Ralph.

4631799 Yea, there was that part in the last chapter of the last story where Twi magiced herself some stallion parts. That's probably what did it. Wonder how long til she starts showing?

Sunset shimmer is pregnant. Everyone knows that when a women has a craving for large amounts of chocolate and they have messed around in the bed, they are most likely pregnant.

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She also may be in heat or period. Being pregnant is not the only option in the list.

~OreoKookie

I just finished the first story and I'm still confused... I need to go reread that conversation with Rarity not on my phone.

And it seems Sunset is Preggers.

Also, I forget but what was the deal with Rarity? Been a while since i read the last fic

The whole thing fit on a single hangar,

I sure hope it would! A hangar is a building where you store aircraft, a hanger is the object where you hang clothes on.

I like the story, somehow this is something more for me as a simple Clopfic, probably it should be like this.

Yay! I finally am reading the Sequel!!!
But....Man there are times when I need to take this in small doses!
Mostly to get over the infinite times Sunset uses/says 'Mistress', and also to readjust myself to the idea of an extremely Sub Sunset.
Anyways- IS SUNSET PREGNANT?!
And Rarity has returned.
This should be interesting.

4742179 Yes Honeytongue, Sunset is indeed pregnant, the signs are quite obvious.

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I sorta knew it already, but I still had to ask. Then that means only one thing.....This is the first Sunlight shipfic (I know anyways) to have Sunset be pregnant with Twilight's filly (at least that's what I'm assuming it will be)!!!
Dang....and I thought I would be the first to do that.
Now I will have to stick around to see how this story goes.

well shit probably shoulda read the first 1 cuz i was not prepared for a sub sunset or pregnant 1 or for twilight and sunset to already be in a relationship... shoulda just said i wasnt ready time to read first book and ill be back am i really gonna post this