Nopony ever said love was easy. For Twilight Sparkle and Sunset Shimmer, this has never been more true. Especially when dealing with the challenges of ending up between the ponies they love. Sequel to The Two Between
Yes! The middle of this story i thought was puttering about a bit too mich and i didnt think it was going anywhere. But in the last two chapters ive come back to this story in a BIG BAD WAY. Finally things are looking up and i just hope this isnt the last pary of this story and i cant wait to see where it goes now everypony is on the same level.
Glad to see that they're fixing things between themselves and actually talking things out. Classic Twilight, passing out like that. Chrysalis was a pony once? I'm glad to see that things are working out. I suspect that we only have a couple chapters left, and that there may be a sequel, am I right?
I am loving this so far! I can't wait to see the next chapter. Which reminds me. How many chapters do you expect this story to have when it is finished?
I'll be frank. A sequel to this is HIGHLY unlikely. Not impossible, not "Never going to happen", but Inky and I are satisfied with where this story is going to end and we both have a lot of other projects we wish to pursue.
There is ONE possibility for a Sequel, but neither of us are even going to talk about it for a long, long time.
Overall, I'm enjoying the resolution. The scenes between Rarity and Sunset were very cute. I like reading Sunset as likeable for a change not a total bitch.
Spells for… physical enhancement are common enough, and Potency is something that was highly prized in the early days of Equestria when many of those spells were written. Though why Twilight did not immediately know about it is unclear.
So Twilight stole a spell from the restricted archives that had fertility baked in? That's a better approach than I've seen before.
Had your brother not been quite so smitten with Cadence, Twilight, I rather was intending to invite him to join.
Considering Shining Armor became smitten with Cadence in his early teens then Celestia would have had her eye on him even before then... Why is Celestia in this story so creepy? Stop it.
I've been harping on the whole law/harem thing for a while. I'm still not a fan of that set up but at the same time this chapter makes it a bit more palatable. Though I think one of my problems lies in the way Celestia presented her "Harem Solution"(airing this Friday on Lifetime).
Twilight asked me for my advice, and I gave it
Yeah...no. It wasn't given as advice. It was given as, well, an ultimatum. It was presented as a law that had to be obeyed. Other solutions weren't even discussed because there was no room for discussion. It had to be done. It's the law. Or at least, that was how it came across to me. The fact that all parties are accepting it and putting a positive spin on the issue doesn't change the fact that was sort of forced on them to begin with. Ok, I'm done with that.
As stated before, I really enjoyed the scenes with Rarity and Sunset. it was nice to see things come full circle and for them to rekindle the friendship they had back in the first story. It was a grueling road to reach this point but the payoff is nice.
Not necessarily on the Shining Armor front. After all, teenagers fall in and out of love all the time. Celestia is hardly exempt from wishful thinking that he might become available when they became adults.
Also glad you like my explanation. I worked very, very hard on it. ^^;
4710232 I ignore your logical statement and continue to imagine Celestia ogling a preteen stallion... And that statement can be taken in horrible ways.
4710092 According to the comics Shining Armor and Cadence got together for the equivalent of Senior Prom and Shining was going over guard recruitment pamphlets at the time. So Shining met Celestia after he was at least the pony equivalent of 18.
“Oh. I overdid it again, didn’t I?” It was a dazed sort of statement, then a huge smile crossed her face. “That’s… wow… I’m… I’m going to pass out now.”
Oh Twilight, you know- you're just fucking adorable
Oh, and about how grueling it was to get here? I'm going to quote the story description at you, just to make my point. "Nopony ever said love was easy." (Okay yeah, I kinda put them through the wringer on this one.)
You are an evil, evil, man. But we all love you anyway.
nice to see this winding up. the story has been well written.throughout but my enjoyment. has varied. the content is tantalizingly close to the edge of my comfort zone but just outside. nevertheless I can see the appeal and feel that the story still well deserves the like I gave it. I look forward to the conclusion
4722431 Which part? Rarity being in the harem? Or Fluttershy? I called Fluttershy, personally. Or maybe you called Twilight's reaction to finding out Sunny is pregnant?
Yes! The middle of this story i thought was puttering about a bit too mich and i didnt think it was going anywhere. But in the last two chapters ive come back to this story in a BIG BAD WAY. Finally things are looking up and i just hope this isnt the last pary of this story and i cant wait to see where it goes now everypony is on the same level.
Glad to see that they're fixing things between themselves and actually talking things out. Classic Twilight, passing out like that. Chrysalis was a pony once? I'm glad to see that things are working out. I suspect that we only have a couple chapters left, and that there may be a sequel, am I right?
I am loving this so far!
I can't wait to see the next chapter. Which reminds me. How many chapters do you expect this story to have when it is finished?
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I'll be frank. A sequel to this is HIGHLY unlikely. Not impossible, not "Never going to happen", but Inky and I are satisfied with where this story is going to end and we both have a lot of other projects we wish to pursue.
There is ONE possibility for a Sequel, but neither of us are even going to talk about it for a long, long time.
Now how is Twilight going to break the news to Spike and the rest of the Mane 6?
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Things are starting to wrap up though, right? Maybe you could do a story about how Rainbow and Fluttershy hooked up?
Overall, I'm enjoying the resolution. The scenes between Rarity and Sunset were very cute. I like reading Sunset as likeable for a change not a total bitch.
So Twilight stole a spell from the restricted archives that had fertility baked in? That's a better approach than I've seen before.
Considering Shining Armor became smitten with Cadence in his early teens then Celestia would have had her eye on him even before then...
Why is Celestia in this story so creepy? Stop it.
I've been harping on the whole law/harem thing for a while. I'm still not a fan of that set up but at the same time this chapter makes it a bit more palatable. Though I think one of my problems lies in the way Celestia presented her "Harem Solution"(airing this Friday on Lifetime).
Yeah...no. It wasn't given as advice. It was given as, well, an ultimatum. It was presented as a law that had to be obeyed. Other solutions weren't even discussed because there was no room for discussion. It had to be done. It's the law.
Or at least, that was how it came across to me.
The fact that all parties are accepting it and putting a positive spin on the issue doesn't change the fact that was sort of forced on them to begin with.
Ok, I'm done with that.
As stated before, I really enjoyed the scenes with Rarity and Sunset. it was nice to see things come full circle and for them to rekindle the friendship they had back in the first story. It was a grueling road to reach this point but the payoff is nice.
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Not necessarily on the Shining Armor front. After all, teenagers fall in and out of love all the time. Celestia is hardly exempt from wishful thinking that he might become available when they became adults.
Also glad you like my explanation. I worked very, very hard on it. ^^;
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I ignore your logical statement and continue to imagine Celestia ogling a preteen stallion...
And that statement can be taken in horrible ways.
Say, did you hit my link?
Ahhhhh... so glad to see the bitterness fade away, I suppose all that's left is for Twilight's Promised tirade on Fluttershy and the final resolutiion
I laughed
I cried
I love this story
Noticed a few missing words and misspells throughout. Not a lot mind you.
We are back to fun! Oh I like fun!
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According to the comics Shining Armor and Cadence got together for the equivalent of Senior Prom and Shining was going over guard recruitment pamphlets at the time. So Shining met Celestia after he was at least the pony equivalent of 18.
Rainbow dash, fluttershy, rarity, and pinkie they're perfect for joining the "family".
Possibly adding applejack too but there may not be enough room.
Oh Twilight, you know- you're just fucking adorable
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Oh, and about how grueling it was to get here?
I'm going to quote the story description at you, just to make my point.
"Nopony ever said love was easy." (Okay yeah, I kinda put them through the wringer on this one.)
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You are an evil, evil, man. But we all love you anyway.
nice to see this winding up. the story has been well written.throughout but my enjoyment. has varied. the content is tantalizingly close to the edge of my comfort zone but just outside. nevertheless I can see the appeal and feel that the story still well deserves the like I gave it. I look forward to the conclusion
I so fucking called it.
4722431 Which part? Rarity being in the harem? Or Fluttershy? I called Fluttershy, personally. Or maybe you called Twilight's reaction to finding out Sunny is pregnant?
"She giggled and let a little bush color her cheeks." Yes. incorrect, but funny nonetheless
I love the fluff in this chapter. Especially after so much heartache, its such a great part of the story.
After all the crap of the last couple of chapters, THAT was satisfying!
Oh my God, they are putting together the Avengers!!! Aweso... Oh wait, no they aren't. Dang it...
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lol
My favorite line in the whole story right here!!!!!