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GODDAMMIT! I accidentally backed out of the page and lost my edits. Rrggh...
connecting.
Period is unnecessary.
You should start a new paragraph here.
Also, Period instead of a comma.
You truly are special, Night, and not just to me.
Accidental capitalization.
comma instead of a semicolon.
...Oh, dear.
5028199 Damn, that sucks.
Well, thanks for doing what you did anyway.
Changes posted.
Jeeze, not a story goes by where Spitfire doesn't "get around" and all the Wonderbolts just engage in copious amounts of action with eachother... just once that'd be an interesting stereotype to break haha.
Twice.
comma.
what.
to.
through (twice).
"that the", maybe?
Oh, this date was funny
And i certainly dont like where the things are going![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
5028405
Same as usual, what's in bold, fix it, please, as this makes no sense. Thank you in advance
Edit;
That word simply didn't belong there, as such there are two possibilities for this, 1) cheeks and 2) face.
6903428
Edited, thanks!
This is either a typo, or you have somehow invented the groan-less pun.
*tilts head upside down* how you do this?!
7148715 lol
nope just a typo, corrected, thanks!