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Is Ataxia set on killing all Alicorns or Princesses? im gonna go with Princesses and use that as an explenation why she might go for the Hospital.
Anyway LOVING the story so much, keep writing, infact go out and write a damn book.
5194531 Alicorns, they shielded the hospital to keep it safe during the battle.
Cadance didn't just leave incase Ataxia destroyed everything in her path on her hunt for the alicorns. Better to draw the line there than to risk her grandkids.
You're not the first one to comment about the book idea lol.
Thanks.
5195699 Well, it's with my editor now, so you may not have that long of a wait lol
Reading this chapter again, I realized a very crucial thing that I may have been in shock about the first time...
DID YOU JUST FUCKING KILL LUNA?!
just finished Past Sins (a awesome fic)
so what do we have going on with twi and dash
.......
you BUCKING KILLED LUNA YOU MONSTER.
but still a good fic all together, now on to the next chapter
anypony.
known.
What's the thing with word "fair" there? Cant get it.
Eight times
now.
Something's missing?
one.
"on", i suppose.
it.
one.
the.
time.
no neend in "s".
not to do.
Wow... both about a chapter and amount of typos
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wow, that was a lot lol
>>Twidashforever I'm going in for one more chapter today, so more to come, I believe
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Original sentence: The Princess of the Night tumbled and fell, she spread her wing wide as she sought to catch herself before she hit the dirt.
I think you can join these two sentences
With an as in between, so
This is just a thought but I think it works.
Original sentence: “Yeah, when was the last time you were able to tell Aurora not to something?”
6945893 Edited, thanks!
Death battle: Ataxia Vs. SCP 682