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When they were on the roof you started calling Spitfire Firestar a few times...I...I got confused before i realised it and to that end re-read it where i didnt think Firestar just killed two of her children
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Good eye, I did it twice, corrected both instances.
Thanks, I had four editors starting out, I'm down to one right now. With one in the hospital, one who's computer broke, and one who hasn't been online for three weeks.
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Now that is unlucky, i also saw alot of grammer mistakes but its gone two in the morning and im tired...goodnight.
Finally all caught up! Just in time for everyone to die a glorious death at the claws of the greatest hunter Equestria has ever known!
Mwahahahahahaha!!
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YOU CAUGHT UP!!!!
God, i miss hearing from you lol.
How did you like it so far?
Hi. I just finished reading all of the truth in meanings stories (not including shower fun saving that for the end). I have been doing this all under no account because i don't like leaving a footprint. You sir have ended that. Before i read this story i honestly hated shippings all in the sort. I also decided to read this story (well the first one) because it was finished. I cannot stand not know things. You can imagine my surprise when i got to the end of this chapter. While i am dying on the inside i am also really happy i get to write this comment. After every single chapter of this book i wanted to say i love seeing you improve as a writer and cannot wait to read the next chapter, and i was jellos of all the people who you responded too because i thought i would never get to talk to you since i thought this story was done. Neither the less, i cannot wait untill the next chapter and expect to be hearing more from me.
And thanks for the stories. I really needed them when i started reading them.
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Let me say thanks for making an account to talk with me.
It's sometimes easy to forget that people can be so moved by the written word. When I started this in Feb (Has it really been that long) I simply sought to create something different, to create my own spin on the world we all loved.
It's evolved into something I could never have imagined, something I never intended for it to become, yet i wouldn't change it for the world.
I've surprised myself so much with this. I always hated writing growing up and sought to do as little of it as possible. TiM came about after I read others that were unfinished. My brother told me that if I thought it was that easy to finish a story (at the time I was bitching about all the unfinished stories on this site i loved) I should write my own.
So I did. people enjoyed it so much (myself included) that I never stopped writing.
One of the best decisions I've ever made.
5164389 The plot twists are so y! It twists so hard that my heart twists out of my aorta and I bleed to death!
And dear Faust it's amurrzing! I mean, Night seems like she can't get a pin on her emotions, but other than that I LOVE IT!
I agree with 5151587 though, in the fact that Ataxia will probably use dark magic when she gets turned back. How awesome would that be?!
"Oh hey look Ataxia is back to normal yay!"
"Lel I still hate you and will try to kill you"
"FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF"
5169611 thats a lot of twists lol
Yeah, Night doesn't really know what she wants or how she feels.
She's conflicted to say the least, but what I have planned will be awesome
5161656 I...assume the one editor is me?
5170960 bombshell just got back he should be helping again soon
Ok so the latest gmod idiot box came out yesterday and I watched it before I read this chap...
Aurora had always been impressive in the air, but this was bullshit as far as she was concerned. The mare was several months pregnant, showing a huge baby bump, and easily kicking her ass. Night wanted to call hacks on this one.
Thanks now all I see in my head is a pregnant Pegasi getting shot down by a computer monitor while,
HAAAAAXXXXXXX!!!!
is yelled in the distance.
5172300 lol.
Hacks! I call Hacks!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
hast should be haste
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Corrected.
Good eye, thanks!
Yes, yes, and no. Time to see if I'm right!
What have i missed? Or is this untold?
AURORA!!!!! *somewhere from behind the horizon"
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I think, "he looked", not "she".
as.
Everything okay?
comma.
throw (or other form of it)?
through.
Not "thri..." but "thir...".
No need.
Oh, i've just read the name of the next chapter, who's next?
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Should'a been bright dawn lol
oops
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Original sentence: Cadance tried to get out, but nothing she did could make another word follow her 'I’s' though.
Find something to make this look better.
Edit (1);
Original sentence: Allowing you to see past all the noise and only see what it truly important.
Edit (2);
Original sentence: Rainbow lay her hoof on Twilight stomach, the action surprised the mare.
Edit (3);
Original sentence: Rainbow buried her head in Twilight embrace.
Edit (4);
Original sentence: It was their chance to get out and see the world or go visit friend and family in other parts of Equestria.
Edit (5);
Original sentence: It was a mark of the trust held in their prince and princes.
Edit (6);
Original sentence: If the formation was needed, it would be Luna or his mom acting as the source; he had to teach two alicorn a very new trick, while he would be staying in the hospital to keep the shield up while the attack was going on.
Edit (7);
Original sentence: “What’s that?” Rainbow asked, pointing a hoof a the vial of blue liquid that Twilight was holding up in front of them.
Edit (8);
Original sentence: Truly, the Elements of Harmony were quite powerful. When the castle landed back on its spot, magical residue radiated out of the open windows, the shockwave from the explosion broke every window in Ponyville, temporarily deafening the ponies that were closer to the caste at the time.
Edit (9);
Original sentence: After all, in science, you learn by falling, and there was nothing better to Twilight than to learn something new.
All those BUCKING!!! sucked
6938433 Well, thank you. Edits posted :)