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nooooo Siros.
thanks for the shout out
4751388 He went out fighting for those he loved. May we all meet such a fate.
4751528 such a fate i would gladly accept if it meant having loved ones live on.
I'll admit i went into this chapter hating u cause what happened to Orion sucked,but i put that aside red it and love it also poor siros
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Blood burning...
Although there is no Tartarus anymore
Nether have a series of stories (I find series of stories kind of rare. you don't get much love for writing a series on this site (see the bs with A Tyrants Words for reasons why))
It seems most people simply prefer short stories of 2-4k words that are quick to read and have no ties to anything else. (Maybe I should have started with those lol)
For TAW read Wind Beneath her wings. this is the defacto Twidash Clopfic IMHO. It is hands down the best story I have read on this site.
For BATS, he has quite a few good ones, (as you can guess I manly only really read Twidash lol) but the one you must read is Spellbound Fireflies it is considered the best Twidash scootadopt fic around.
The longest Twidash fic I know of is Growing Pains. at 375,000 words. that fic is epic. (although it is uncompleted with no updates in almost a year )
Given i wrote my stories, so I could not place them on any list. (We are always the hardest of our own work.) So I am not sure how my story stands up to those I consider the greatest.
4776204 Nice, love it.
Taxing works better.
Yikes...
Then again, if that happened to me, that'd probably be my own words.
"Called", probably.
...
There're two instances of this I've seen so far, but I'm fairly sure it's one word, unless you're separating them for a reason.
do
Probably could do with a semicolon instead of a comma there.
Whenever "'cause" is used as a shorthand for "because", don't forget to include the apostrophe at the beginning.
And now she suffers heatstroke or something?
Needs a comma after "existed"
Period instead of a comma.
Needs a period separating the two. Also, I'd reword the second part to this: "What about you?"
Probably should be a comma between "asked" and "annoyed"
They're idiots, deities, or beings blessed by deific/demonic forces that can actually hold a candle to them.
*sniff* Never change, Twilight. Never change.
*manlytears.jpeg*
*Shiningliquidpride.gif*
And now Blood Oath's gonna get it.
Congratulations!
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Blood Dawn
Changes posted, Thanks!
4777100
thanks
Thank you Twidashforever I sure will look into those writers.
Now as for the chapter...OMG that was epic to no end. I am very glad that Twilight was able to help Icarus and Aruora with their injuries, but it makes it all the better that Aruora's womb was repaired. But my favorite part by far is when Rainbow Dash practically annihilated Blood in one hit. That definitely was what I wanted to happen to him. I know that he is still alive.....unfortunately.... but the way he went through all of those things and into magma. I could not ask anything better...can not wait to see what happens to him next or what you will do Grim for that matter.
You are probably right about how a lot of these people are looking for one story type deals, but as for me I prefer series over one story. It is more interesting that way. Just wanted to throw that out to you, as always keep up the good work.
4784891 me too, a series grips you more than a short story would
There is something there, something I did not yet understand
D'AWWWWWWW (Warclaw hospital scene)
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Maybe, "was at it's worst." will be better? (either way, you lost ')?
So... "a", "the" or, either way, "an"? Not really good with this stuff
Why "s"?
Maybe, better "this"?
Also, i saw under one of your fics before your comment about that MAYBE someday there will be Twi and Dash against all others...
I'll just left this there and let you decide for yourself how much of a dumb i am
4777158 ok two ways for this;
Either A. It's is supposed to be a comer or,
B. A capital, as this is not right
6881209
How's this
6881219 that will work perfectly, as I had not thought of that but yes that will work perfectly. On to the next chapter, as Luna would say, "Huza"