good shit good shit. i was hopping the spell would drop when fell asleep and when woke up he would be balls deep in his mom but none the less great chapter my friend. i look forward to more
Very nice, but I hope Celestia eventually tells him what really happened, and talks with him about it.
Also, hope we get to see that missing scene with Rarity.
And I'm guessing the reason no one's getting pregnant is because Spike's only using one of his two shafts, and it's the one he isn't using that releases the fertile seed.
Errr, I'm a little confused. There's something about Comet that's suspicious. Did Celestia hire her simply so she could spy on Spike or something?
In other news, wow. Every mare Spike is meeting is wanting to bed him. Does he literally attract mares or something? Celestia needs to keep him under control, lest he get too greedy.
5634656 Right, I forgot the scene introducing her was Luna in disguise. My bad. Now it's just a creepy thought that she did that with her son.
And I thought Spike was the one who didn't tell Celestia stuff. Doesn't Celestia want to keep Spike's greed under control? With that, it's like she's encouraging it.
5635316 no its more like she wants to monitor it so she can sweep in at the perfect time to be a part of his 'hoard' and its not like he doesn't tell her stuff its more that he didn't think it was a big deal. And she couldn't just go and ask him considering he still see's her as his mother when she see's him as a mate
At the rate Celestia is working poor Spike, it wont be long before his greed growth will be replaced by his lust growth, which means that no female wont be able to be satisfied by him, no matter the species, power, or strength of accomodation potions or spells?
Ok I had to put a "Bookmark" in before I read anymore I think the library will be on FIRE when Spike gets back. That's just what I think it would be funny if it happened eh?
Well, that was interestin' day for t drake n' it explains Tia's comment on havin' sex with him before t whole "accidentally creatin' a herd thru sex" island vacation mess took place
I loved my little pleasure island and I wana know who those 5 mares were at the end of the cruise,but I cant find out until after this story us complete.please update!!
Love the story so far, my only complaint is the semi-consensual rape sunbutt pulled on Spike. While he didn't say no, if he knew that was Cele in disguise, 9/10 chances are he would reject and fly back to ponyville. And if sunbutt wants spike to fuck her regardless of whether or not he wants to, then that's full on rape, which is something I'm not to big of a fan on.
good shit good shit. i was hopping the spell would drop when fell asleep and when woke up he would be balls deep in his mom but none the less great chapter my friend. i look forward to more
Very nice but really should have included Spikes' scene with Rarity.
Maybe if you could show the missing sex scene at Rarity's Boutique.
Very nice, but I hope Celestia eventually tells him what really happened, and talks with him about it.
Also, hope we get to see that missing scene with Rarity.
And I'm guessing the reason no one's getting pregnant is because Spike's only using one of his two shafts, and it's the one he isn't using that releases the fertile seed.
Errr, I'm a little confused. There's something about Comet that's suspicious. Did Celestia hire her simply so she could spy on Spike or something?
In other news, wow. Every mare Spike is meeting is wanting to bed him. Does he literally attract mares or something? Celestia needs to keep him under control, lest he get too greedy.
5633335 bro seriously? Comet was Celestia in disguise
5634656 Right, I forgot the scene introducing her was Luna in disguise. My bad. Now it's just a creepy thought that she did that with her son.
And I thought Spike was the one who didn't tell Celestia stuff. Doesn't Celestia want to keep Spike's greed under control? With that, it's like she's encouraging it.
5635316 no its more like she wants to monitor it so she can sweep in at the perfect time to be a part of his 'hoard' and its not like he doesn't tell her stuff its more that he didn't think it was a big deal. And she couldn't just go and ask him considering he still see's her as his mother when she see's him as a mate
That ending was pure hilarity.
Most excellent.
5634656 Don't forget, in MLPI Epilogue, that Celestia told Spike that he had sex with her, but he didn't know Comet was actually Celestia in disguise.
Donut Joe is a unicorn stallion and there are also a couple of errors I noticed.
It's not that Spike is hoarding mares...mares are hoarding him.
I FREAKING LOVE IT!
At the rate Celestia is working poor Spike, it wont be long before his greed growth will be replaced by his lust growth, which means that no female wont be able to be satisfied by him, no matter the species, power, or strength of accomodation potions or spells?
ONE WORD:
GIGGETY.
Ok I had to put a "Bookmark" in before I read anymore I think the library will be on FIRE when Spike gets back. That's just what I think it would be funny if it happened eh?
I lost this story got back and two chapters were added. Read them and it was amazing
5843028 Agreed
Update soon! I'm dying to find out what happens next
KO hope the next chapter comes so cause I want to know what else did spike did to make the other girls fall for him
Well, that was interestin' day for t drake n' it explains Tia's comment on havin' sex with him before t whole "accidentally creatin' a herd thru sex" island vacation mess took place
4490493 KO please say that the next chapter is coming soon.
I loved my little pleasure island and I wana know who those 5 mares were at the end of the cruise,but I cant find out until after this story us complete.please update!!
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So true my friend. U deserve a stache
Love the story so far, my only complaint is the semi-consensual rape sunbutt pulled on Spike. While he didn't say no, if he knew that was Cele in disguise, 9/10 chances are he would reject and fly back to ponyville. And if sunbutt wants spike to fuck her regardless of whether or not he wants to, then that's full on rape, which is something I'm not to big of a fan on.
What dose gleaming comet look like again?
oh snap! the moonbutt has been triggered!
The part with Celestia remembering her time with Spike and their relationship is simply magnificent Ekhidna helped me to learn how to love Momlestia