3) Finally, I know this has come up many a time, but I'd like to assure you all here and now, none of the mares Spike has slept with are pregnant. There's a reason for it, but that will be revealed in the sequel.
Awww....I'm a little disappointed with that. I was kinda hoping that my idea of many months ago that Spike accidentally knocked Pinkie Pie up when his 'addition' first surfaced, and that the Cakes and Princess Celestia knew about it was an actual thing. But in another light, that may just be too much drama in a comedy like this. So in short, I understand your position.
Now to the chapter. Love me some Octavia, even more so when Spike's involved. Seriously, I think that there is a gold mine because there is so much potential with those two characters. And involving that wild card of a roomie and the unicorn DJ Vinyl Scratch in the picture, you definitely made it fun, sexy, and believeable. I enjoyed it immensely
Wow, they already had a agreement to keep it to their bedrooms? They think ahead don't they?
Personally I'm more of a fan of Spike sticking to a single mare, but hey to each their own. Still fun to read.
Damn Spike, you probably should have told Celestia about doing these odd jobs before anypony else. You know how parents can be, and let's face it, "odd jobs". It sounds suspicious.
This was great but......when did Octavia get undressed?. You never detail her taking off her clothes, so she's just suddenly naked when her and Spike 69. Sooooo when did she undress herself? XD
5629094 Actually, shortly before Vinyl comments about how hot the show is - when they turn and she's starting to masturbate - there's one sentence about them pulling each other's clothes off.
3) Finally, I know this has come up many a time, but I'd like to assure you all here and now, none of the mares Spike has slept with are pregnant. There's a reason for it, but that will be revealed in the sequel.
The reason is that they are completely different fucking species! Does anyone even understand basic biology!?
Awww....I'm a little disappointed with that
. I was kinda hoping that my idea of many months ago that Spike accidentally knocked Pinkie Pie up when his 'addition' first surfaced, and that the Cakes and Princess Celestia knew about it was an actual thing. But in another light, that may just be too much drama in a comedy like this. So in short, I understand your position.
Now to the chapter. Love me some Octavia, even more so when Spike's involved. Seriously, I think that there is a gold mine because there is so much potential with those two characters. And involving that wild card of a roomie and the unicorn DJ Vinyl Scratch in the picture, you definitely made it fun, sexy, and believeable. I enjoyed it immensely


The part of Luna's double sided dildo GOT me excited!!!
Yay update
Wow, they already had a agreement to keep it to their bedrooms? They think ahead don't they?
Personally I'm more of a fan of Spike sticking to a single mare, but hey to each their own. Still fun to read.
Damn Spike, you probably should have told Celestia about doing these odd jobs before anypony else. You know how parents can be, and let's face it, "odd jobs". It sounds suspicious.
This was great but......when did Octavia get undressed?. You never detail her taking off her clothes, so she's just suddenly naked when her and Spike 69. Sooooo when did she undress herself? XD
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Actually, shortly before Vinyl comments about how hot the show is - when they turn and she's starting to masturbate - there's one sentence about them pulling each other's clothes off.
The reason is that they are completely different fucking species! Does anyone even understand basic biology!?
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I got an answer to that *waves hands in a "Mystical" way* magic...
let me take a guess is it that ther not in esterus?
Wow that was one nice read :3 Nice job on Octavia here! :3 And the description of Spike climaxing was beautiful :3