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Is she acute or obtuse?
5048303 well with how hes stuttering shes clearly not augly
5048303
She's a cute angle, obviously
5048303
FUuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Fucking Hot Fuzz!!!!
5048303
Acute, Dust is defantly acute. Its Cosmic who always Obtuse.
5048303 why can't it be straight, reflex or right?
5048303 She might be just right.
5048434 She could be a right angle, given this love triangle's headless hypotenuse.
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All of you are having way too much fun with this...
5048501 There's gotta be a ray of humor to cross the line in this strange geometry lesson of love, hermano.
5048501 What can I say, I love math, also DM what are you doing here?
5048501
You know how we are, if we find anything a degree off, we vector off all out of quadrant. I know its hip to be but try not to be to square.
This chapter was adorable. Thank you.
I have to say though, looking back at the previous chapter, Jason really overreacted when he came to slicing Cosmic's head off. Then again, this is a guy with PTSD who pretty much experienced the mourning for many of his comrades, friends, and innocent people dying in his hands during whatever war he was involved in. He probably didn't want to experience the tragedy of that happening again when Dust 'left' per say.
Then there's the sadness Cosmic was expressing with the body after that damaging tantrum she acted on Jason. Ya see what you did there man? You feel like a bastard for causing her that much grief? Well you should.
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Seriously man, calm the fuck down and get your priorities straight before getting so brash. I wouldn't say you deserved the beating, but you had it coming that's for sure.
And who's to say Cosmic and Dust were like that before they separated? What if 'Cosmic Dust' was a completely different pony compared to when the body and head split? Would the two different personalities pretty much die off as the real Cosmic Dust comes to fruition?
As far as what I'm thinking Jason's planning to do, is that he wants Cosmic and Dust to have their own bodies and heads while still keeping their same personalities. So what, you want to have two functioning girlfriends/marefriends? Is that where you're going? I'm taking Cosmic's side in thinking he did what he did for himself, because that's just plain greedy right there. I'm curious to how this will turn out, but this may be the first time I actually WANT a protagonist to go through tough shit to reach their goal. Again, I'm not sure if Jason DESERVES it, but he would have it coming.
Out of curiosity because I just got here... How often do you update this story? It is great and I love the personality/personalities you've thrown into it but I need to know how often it comes around because if you are one of the authors that posts bi-monthly then I'll have to re-read and that can become a hassle hehe
Disembodied drama.
5048468 Your shit eating grin of an avatar fits your comment perfectly.
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To be fair, neither of them have mentioned 'Cosmic Dust' as being an entity different from Cosmic or Dust. So his assumption of them being individual beings is justified in that regard.
5048501 I know, I should bake them all a pi
Well, I'm really glad they worked that out. That was a really dickish thing to do considering Cosmic had no idea what would happen if they fused and Dust was willing to do it, knowing the risks. But at least the three are totally fine for now.
I predict that they'll try to pull Dust's soul out and place it in a new body or maybe the two will end up mixed together with both traits. Either way, I'm sure Jason and Cosmic will be whole again by the end.
And of course every word she said to him was right.
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I find this story both morbidly fascinating, and incredibly humorous. Why wouldn't I be here?
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>Morbidly fascinating
It's just a story about a mare trapped in two pieces for over three hundred years...nothing morbid about that.
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the two options I see are fusing their consciousness into one mind
or magically growing a new head and body to put their respective parts on so they can each have a body
Two questions so far:
What was Dust trying to say in the hospital room? My best guess is "Hey, put your head on my neck, it'll be cool!" Which would probably be pretty cool.
Why doesn't Jason have split personalities now that he's undergone the same magical split? Maybe because they haven't been apart long enough to gain different memories and thus new personalities?
I feel slightly cheated but still liked how this come out.
Good job!
5050040 I just didn't expect to see you here
5053128
Alright, look. I am not here for the clop.
I like this premise, so I ignore the one for the other...
Does that help?
Or have I just further alienated you by implying that you thought I was here for the clop, and that, therefore, everyone else is here for the clop, and omygosh, I've just ruined everything and--
*WHAP*
Ow...right...
5053284 I never assumed you came here to clop. Heck I don't read this for that, why would I assume that of you
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Because it is a clop story. The author mostly writes clop. And the tags just absolutely scream "clop."
But moving on, yeah. I'm here. I like this.
It gets a little weird at times, but I like it.
5053333
Oi...I write stories that contain clop.
Story focus is best focus!
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Obviously, otherwise I wouldn't be here...
I was speaking in terms of genre.
5053361
:t
>Clop as a genre
U wot m8?
5053364
"Erotica" is the proper term, in this case it can be shortened to clop.
5053369
Nah mate...I write some erotica, but most of it is just stories with a clop scene or two. Like I said, it's focusing on the plot or the characters more than the fucking.
5053361 5053364 Guys can we just agree that this is a good story, and stop talking about genres that may or may not be actual genres
5053376
Agree to disagree on definitions then?
It's quite obvious you focus on stories primarily, I was never arguing that.
5053385
Aye...I just get defensive when people say I write clop. It's all good m8.
..... i seriously cannot upvote this enough. This ranks in my top stories list, right up with My little Dashie and Griffin the Griffin in writing quality, just smooth progression, fantastic character development, and seamless transition and melding between story, clop and other bits and pieces you include. Bravo good sir, Bravo.
Why is Jason going full retard this whole chapter?
Don't make it a running gag please.
I really love this story. There is one thing that bothers me which nobody else seems to have thought of though. Why do they BOTH have British accents? That seems to stretch credibility for me. Jason himself mentioned that his natural accent gets him a lot of questions, implying that the accent isn't common among humans in Equestria (or possibly just Ponyville). So what are the chances that after 300 years of isolation, the only person to EVER show Cosmic Dust some kindness just so happens to be one of the few (if not the only) human in Ponyville/Equestria that has a similar accent to her own. If there is not some sort of magic/fate involved in their meeting, then that is highly unlikely to the point of disbelief.
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My interpretation of that scene was: Dust already knew that her personality might disappear after fusing with Cosmic, so she wanted one last goodbye kiss in case they never saw one another again.
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The accent is common enough among certain ponies, and there are a number of English or scots accented humans living in Canterlot, he refers to Ponyville when he mentions his accent getting him questioned.
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It doesn't bother me too much, and it certainly is possible. But you have to admit it seems less likely that these two, already being in the minority, would stumble across each other like that. It's a unique situation that isn't analogous to simply meeting another Brit in a common situation.
Not a criticism. If anything, it imparts a certain "meant to be" quality. Anyway, great job.
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He was either going to be dutch, canadian or English. I decided to go with English. Cosmic was always going to be northenglish, due to her being from Trottingham, which is full of brit ponies.
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Better than American, in my opinion. Not that I have anything against Americans (hell, I am one), but it's nice to see differences. Based on 95% of fan fiction, you'd think America was the only place in the world.
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Multicultural cast was a good choice, it's how I got a slav with Vinyl, a romanian with Twilight, a brit with a brit, a french with the pie sisters...
5083431
Well, I haven't actually read your other stories, but you certainly have caught my interest. I don't take the time to register on sites for no good reason, so kudos. You finally got me to stop lurking.
5053385 plot with a bit of porn on the side.
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That makes a lot of sense.
So if i shot her head off before she lost it, would i need a flash grenade, because, you know......
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