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....In the words of the Nostalgia Critic: "Jesus, man! Couldn't you put like a happy face in there or something?" I mean, I'm all for dark stuff but something like that, especially for a kid, seemed more scarring than scary. Though, this was still another awesome chapter! Looking forward to the conclusion of this.
this alternate form of Button sure seem interesting to me at least if he was to become a drakonequis.
That was a rather good update. Though I do have to agree with shadowprove on the nightmare scene.
7279129 I honestly do feel bad and think I went too far with the nightmare
7279151 Well given all the emotion of the last chapter, it is understandable Button would have such a ferocious nightmare.
7279171 The nightmare was also symbolic - Sweetie Belle falling to her doom while Button couldn't do anything reflected him breaking his promise and letting her down
The monsters merging with Button and turning him into a monster himself and seeing his friends through a screen represented how he was letting his life get consumed by these video games
7279241 Nicely done.
I'm lying in bed at the chapters conclusion cackling like a madman
7279241 holy fucking shit that was deep as FUCK!!!
7284336 No, not really. But thnx
7284351 that nightmare scene was. And the sad feels at the end.
7284416 Don't shed tears just yet...!
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Rainbow Dash (in my head-canon) is most certainly an Alpha-level pegasus
Fluttershy however, is more of a Gamma. I say that because she's a moderate flyer at best while her true talents lie in animal care/handling, as well as her ability to use 'the Stare' to stare down unruly animals and such
Pinkie Pie... is an anomaly. I don't think she can really be classified by these magical levels, and that's because of her cartoonish behavior, capabilities, and randomness
I actually consider Pinkie, as well as Cheese Sandwich, and maybe even Party Favor, to be something that sets them apart from regular pony magic, and that's because they're Party Ponies! Because of how random and unpredictable they are, they can't truly be classified by any magic level despite the things they are clearly capable of.
7296377 no worries mate. These are just what I spot on a casual read through of a chapter. Though the part that actually takes the longest is figuring out what is the first one from the chapter, because I'm doing this on mobile I've got a clipboard that can fit more than one entry on it, and I don't clear it between chapters, or even stories. So finding where to start on the long list takes a sec. Though a bigger clipboard is much easier than doing it on PC. Even if selecting words is a bit of a hassle.
In other words, I'm happy to help improve the quality of any story I come across. (So long as it is not currently being completely re-written (my little portal) or was just translated into english and would need a complete re-write to make it even worth correcting through the comments (chaos, age of spike))
I love reading stories, and I want as many others to enjoy reading the stories I read as possible. And having fewer mistakes certainly makes things easier to enjoy.
this seen whit the train and platform reminds me off an movie don't know what it kalled but somethnig like that happened but more happy
found more of the dreaded spell check typo
slashed lean through the tower [clean]
gorgeous negula-like mane [nebula] ???
his failure to fulfil his promise [fulfill ]
Button Mash is currently thinking: “I’ve created a monster! A hell within my head! (I forgot these lyrics...) I’ve created a monster! A beast within my brain, I’m all alone, out on my own, oh I’m so scared! Wake me from my nightmare!”
((Song is Nightmare by Set it Off))