A perfect day for me would be filled with calm and peaceful activities. I can never have one of those days. Not with all these ponies and their zany adventures. No, I just want to sit down and eat my breakfast but a certain somebunny won't even let me have that...
Welp, if this is your first story it's certainly better than mine was. Keep working at it I think you could get quite good.
Good job i really enjoyed this
I really like this story grab your ass cause soon as you blow carrot castle to kingdom come your gonna be swimmin in orange gravy!