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Through A Glass Darkly

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Lululu #1 · Apr 24th, 2014 · · · Into the Mind ·

'Tis fairly good, and I will continue to read it when more comes out. My one big bit of constructive criticism is that a lot of the time you just state how Sweetie is feeling, and it comes across as rather detached (particularly the very start, about her friend's death).