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XD that fast, huh? You're quick to please people.
4168836 This was planned earlier today, but I was looking for inspiration. Or, maybe I was looking for distraction. Either way, I needed to get this chapter out.
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Yeah when I started reading I wanted to make sure I had the correct story...this chapter kinda came from nowhere.
4168891 Yeah… I like throwing curve balls sometimes. I promised Dustine Lange a Chekhov's Gun chapter. It was going to be longer, but I didn't wanna spoil anything.
You... I... this... This is going in a direction I am going to fu*king love!!!
When I find a story with this much adventure in it, I read the shit out of them!
A story by the name of "Chaotic Harmony" by Shirotora, around 185,000 words, I have read three times, and I will read it a fourth time once he is done going over it, all because of how epic it is!
Keep going!
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Ahhhh. Now it makes sense.
Okay, that's it. I'm done.
OH THE FINAL FANTASY REFERENCES!!!!!!!!!!!
http://i.imgur.com/LWRynFF.gif
4169009 I thank you! This is most likely my most ambitious project to date, even more so than White Rabbit Object.
4170900 I didn't know if anyone would pick up on that. Good show!
4172843 well the references were kinda heavy
Wow huge time gap or did accidentally skip a chapter
Alright. It's official. I'm confuzzled.
Um...it REALLY feels like we skipped a chapter...or five. Can we go back and see how we went from his pony girl troubles to him being a freakin archmage searching for other humans?
4320196 Me too.
I'm dubble confuzzled.
What the hell is THIS? That has nothing to do with what's happening in Ponyville, does it?
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Me too
When you do the time warp, you go for the major spoilers!
Final Fantasy and Star Wars battle themes. I'm geeking out too much today. Especially because Celes was from a different game. She was from VI if I recall correctly.
5674863 Yes, she is. Not my favorite mage from FF VI, but a close third.
i.imgur.com/CeKxS.jpg
Are joo nuclear?
...could you be nuclear.
for Chekov?
aufsgdsfkjhrpTOOMUCHFF
im trying my hardest to follow the storylines here but its still all messed up like one chapter they go there then the next a new OC comes up and with a new timeline.
what the heck?!
still good though!
I'm glade I'm not the only one that is confused.
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Ah! FFVI! Really a jewel under the RPGs! My favorite one was the thief, Locke! But rather liked Terra too! Not to mention Edgar! That guy that was always charming others!
As a side note, this chapter seems to be far in the future. Makes me wonder why you published it in that order.
Yeah, the moment I had no idea where this was going, I have to stop here. If this "story" is going to throw these curveballs without even leaving a hint of how it got there, this isn't worth my time.
This time warp as you put it did not make no sense in this part of your story kind of mess it up.
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But there was a hint! The dream, remember?
It looks like there's a war looming on the horizon, and Stevie is about to become a very important leader in it. So, we're seeing two parts of the same timeline - most of it about how he got 'up to speed' on Equus, and little tidbits of what will come later.
It's actually a pretty interesting way to ease the reader into the events to come, whet your appetite... reveal a little bit of what's behind the curtain, without giving too much away.
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Yeah, let's go with that.