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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG PANCAKES! AN UPDATE!? WUHU!
Im worried ... how much help WILL Discord be. I know he can do planetary magics.. and there's only umm 15000 soldiers.. well within his magical abilities to turn to ... snuffly little cuddly wabbits... but will he?
Holy crud muffins! 21K words? That's just slightly longer than the longest chapter of Greater Lights: Adaptation!
And it was all worth it.
6535159 I know right? Who'd thunk it?
6535487 Actually, there's twenty-five thousand Proletariat troopers amassed at the CotRPS. Discord's assistance is going to come with consequences, but you might not believe how those consequences play out...
6535626 Many apologies for the delay. Real life has been handing me my ass. I hope to bring the next up very soon; there's not going to be a six month hiatus like last time.
Aww, I've got to get ready for work! I'll finish later
... You are mean. I was enjoying a nice sappy romance and now I have to reread thIs entire story all at once to make sense of this chapter. Curse you for good writing!
Amazing chapter.^_^ Though that first part seemed oddly familiar.
Awesome... Writing... Need... More!!!
6537391 Just… started‥ Chapter 40… Must stop… typing like… William Shatner…!
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
The battle... it beckons me.
For some reason an old saying keeps popping into my head when I think of Steven having to fight.
"Remember, son. It is not your job to die for your beliefs or country. It's to make sure that the other poor bastard, on the other side, dies for his."
6538325 Working on it, boyo, working on it…
6538666 As it does all.
6539357 Yes, yes, those poor insufferable morons…
Omg I love this story <3
6541806 Well, I'm glad you like it!
6561484 When I can find the motivation, and manage to get off my lazy ass, I'll fix those abbreviations.
As for Rarity's accent… I used to live in the Northeast, and trust me, I've heard them speak. With the exception of anyone living along the northern Appalachian range, most Northerners have no "r" sound in their speech. Ever heard of a Yankee Drawl? The Northeastern Atlantic accent Rarity is affecting does that, too. Most "ar" sounds come out as drawled "ah" noise. I kinda like.
6589069 At the point you're reading this, Steve is still trying to decide if he's experiencing a massive hallucination or is dead and this is his mind's last minute of life and/or electro-chemical processes. As for the massive hypocrisy Steve has regarding Twilight, let's just say he's still rather cynical about how this world's inhabitants deal with an alien being. He's judging them by the same lens he does humanity, which isn't very rosy, to say the least.
6588469 I never liked that about other HIE fics, myself. It's like, "Oh, here I am in this strange world where the local wildlife is as intelligent as I am. But hey, I know what everything is, so it's no big deal." I should have made it known in the long description that Steve's world doesn't have My Little Pony. The series was never created in his world, and his knowledge of mythology is negligible to say the least.
6589060 I chalk it up more to poor writing then anything. Its just poorly written set-up to unnecessarily bash a character.
6767559 That's- a possibility. The early chapters were written off the cuff, with no real plan. I've been working hard to improve the flow of the story by keeping an outline for each chapter. Praytell, if you were writing this, how would make this scene better? It's one thing to level criticism; it's quite another to provide a useful solution.
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I would have either have the character been genuinely dumb or display irrational/slow traits or behavioral concepts which would have been interpreted by equestrian culture as being a bit slow on the uptake. Having him act retarded then have him get mad that Twilight perceives him as such just doesn't make sense.
Having him act intelligent from the get-go and having Twilight act more in line with her canon characterization would actually make more sense. When evidence is displayed that shows Twilight that she ers in her judgement or belief of character incompetency she is shown to be apologetic and amends her behavior instead of being stagnant which prevents character growth.
So I would have had her learn a lesson which in all honesty should only take a chapter or two, three at the minimum and have her grow as a character from the experience and work on her behavior and thoughts on such a suggestion.
I would have had both characters try their best to either get along or accept other faults in if you're playing one is too stubborn or set in their ways I would have had other intelligent or mature characters rationally point out that their behavior is destructive and how one or both are being unfair in the situation.
I would have done something like that.
6771907 You've obviously given this some thought. I'll need to give it just as much thought.
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Considering I have a 650+k Story giving thought is all I do. XD
6772275 I did not know that!
6810719 Sorely tempting, yes, but ultimately, I'm not that cheap. Bungie did a job with the Halo series, so I felt it would dishonor them if I co-opted their naming conventions.
6874135 I couldn't help myself, sorry!
6874052 I've never understood why most HiE's present a perfectly sane human being processing a word beyond their imagining and staying in any way mentally stable. Steve's state of mind is- all over the place, because he has no idea if he's under a hallucination or this is a death dream he's having. I- don't think I wrote that aspect of his psyche well.
6874135 That, I'm pretty sure, will be the last Frozen reference. (I aim to add in some Firefly and Doctor Who in there somewhere.)
6561484 I am making the assumption that Equestria doesn't have the same standards for self-defense or stand your ground clauses.
7001519 Yea, verily, it doth suck!
7008334 I didn't know that was a thing.
7062792 That's why I added in the anachronoism warnings in my description and in the chapter preceding the the timeshift. As a general rule, every fifteenth chapter either goes back in time or forward in time. The tone of speech should help you determine when it is.
House Praetorian, House Intelligentsia, and this:
(...Wow, I'm in rare form today.) It's the Random Inspiration AGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIN!
Today's randomness is inspired by the quote, all above, and the following at timestamp 6:40.
Heavy Flamer Heresy | Space Hulk: Deathwing by TheRussianBadger on YouTube. Warning: Guys having fun in a Warhammer 40K game. AKA They curse/swear in fun/jest.
(deploys Assault Cannon)
House Praetorian be like: (fires short burst of Assault Cannon at Cloister Bell)
Me, An Intelligentsia: (Assault Cannon winds up and unloads full bore on Cloister Bell)
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(Plays dubstep remix of of the Doctor Who theme.)
Sort of contradicting your own lore. Twi distinctly called his arms forelegs when inspecting for plane-related damage, back around in chapter 2 or so.
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Steve is an idiot when it comes to equine anatomy. I should have made that more plain.