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4207625 Here I come AND GET IT!
dude personally i would prefer he ended with RD rather than fluttershy
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I can see it going eather way. I don't care much though.
4209100 I'm not sure that Steve x Rd would work. There's a better chance of Twilight x Steve than that……
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Interesting...
Is that some forshadowing?
4212219 Maybe… Although Swike is much better prospect.
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Spike and Steve?
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Oh, sorry.
That is Sweetie and Spike.
I'm stupid.
4212269 Anyway, while I have an idea about how this will end up, that doesn't mean it wont change by the time I reach The Chapter Last.
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I'll be watin'.
4212324 Now I need to see if I can beef up Confessions: Fluttershy. That's my weakest chapter by far, in my estimation.
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It could us a bit more, in my opinion.
But I still liked it.
4212339 Got any suggestions?
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I could re-read it when I get the time and tell you what I think.
4212413 Okay, cool.
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All I can really think to add to it is more about how Fluttershy is feeling about the situation and how she feels about Steve in general.
Sorry. I know it isn't much to go with.
4212545 Actually, that is a lot of help. I did want to go into why Flutters likes Steve so much. And I wanted to avoid having it explained as Florence Nightingale Syndrome.
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Hmm... I never thought of it like that.
Maby she has these feelings for him because of how helpless he was, but was able to show his greatfullness in an intelligent way unlike the animals she cares for.
4212634 And, based on things she learned from him while he convalesced in her home, she found out that he's a passionate being with moral center that has rough ride in life (No Gary Stu, though. Steve complains like any guy, even going so far as stating that the Universe is out to get him. (Which eventually turn out to be kinda true…))
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Actually, Gary Stus' don't really bother me to much as long as it is not completely overboard.
4212664 I try to avoid Gary Stues like a plague. A flesh-devouring, mind-warping, reality-destroying plague…
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I understand
4212735 Why does Ensign Sue Must Die only update once a week?! I wanna get my Sue Trek fix now!
4237567 Exactly.
4237015 Oh, there will be more. In varying states of hysteria…
4237567 THANK YOU!!! I just... can't understand stuff like Foal-con and Rape. I mean, those guys need some help. Seriously.
4238079 I wouldn't say no to a little FutaLuna… but I'm not gonna write about it.
4239434 It's almost as bad as "Let It Go," right?
Enjoy that hayburger now, dude. It'll probably come back for revenge later...
4343118 Actually, I'm pretty sure Steve can consume just about anything without any gastrointestinal distress. That's why he was so fat back on Earth. That, and lack of exercise.
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Twahlahght is best pony.
LOL I have to say it.
4705637 No, Luna best pony
4884174 Actually, Luna is Best Princess. Fluttershy is Best Pony. IMHO, of course.
This is terrible advice.
5106549 It probably is. It's also likely that Steve misheard it. His short term memory is really faulty.
I scream, you scream, we all scream for mare cream!
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Actually, humans can eat most anything (a man did once eat a flying machine, after all!), but you have to keep in mind the dangers of sharp objects and toxic materials.
The biggest issue with eating hay is that our digestive tract isn't designed to be able to do anything with it.
Hay is comprised almost entirely of cellulose (plant fiber), which our stomachs cannot break down enough to derive nutrition from, meaning it'll come out the same way it went in (though soggier).
This all boils down to it being ruffage, so it's like he's eating "Colon Blow".
It's all gonna come out in a hurry!
Rainbow this chapter...
6037691 I- can't even…
6037691 Wha?
My reaction to this statement
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Ooh! Dashie was a naughty little girl! I hope there will be more of these two! Especially of Dashie's new side!
There are just too many problems with this philosophy; at least in my eyes, anyways.
Don't ever have kids if you're going to give advice to a minor like that.
I fucking lost it at twahlahght
> chapter title
That sounds distinctly dixielandish.
Okay, so... after a bit of a rocky start (and a short bout with expectations set a lil' too high by the first few chapters), this is kinda okay. I mean, I sorely miss the thought that got put into the first few chapters, but there's something to be said for the simplicity of "I was going about my day, and then I {X}; end chapter" (where {X} is usually "fucked something").
Still, it could stand a bit more of that intelligent-like talkin' that it had at the beginning there. I get why you blasted past it, but still...
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I'm of the mind that Applejack's accent is some blend/bastardization of Virginian/Kentuckian. So, yeah, there's a lot of muddling of vowels and certain constants.
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Well, I am from Texas… but I was just having a little fun with the title and chapter.