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For the battle.
By the same impetus, Applejack and Rainbow Dash rushed into a crowd of staggering troops, who by some fit of genius or intuition, had decided not to fire their weapons until after they’re vertigo subsided.
You mean 'their', not 'they're' there. Just a little nitpick. Now, back to reading the long awaited chapter.^^
Another problem. You consistently misspell 'alicorn' as 'alacorn'.
where you or where you not involved in the events that this panel is currently investigating?”
You mean to use 'were' there, not 'where'.;) Now, back to reading.^^
What the heck is 'ledrfladder'?
and his abilities could make him a liability to the piece of Our Subjects.
You mean 'peace', not 'piece'.
“Yes,” Luna acknowledged, “they had come seeking him. There 25,000 of them each equipped with weapons such as this. I believe my sister will attest that the means and manner of their infiltration have yet to be detected. And the artificial being working in conjunction with Sir Steven has yet to determine who they assailed us that day. ‘Tis a mystery most perplexing.”
I think you mean 'how they assailed us', not 'who'.;)
Another amazing chapter.^^ As usual. Though, I do hope that Molly is still alive, regardless of... circumstances. XD
7274925 Ledrfladder is what I call the "bat ponies." In the canon for this story, that is the true tribe name for all thestrals/bat ponies.
7275518 Magic 8 Ball says: The future is uncertain; ask again some other time.
7275566 Ah. Thanks.
Found a wee issue you might wish to address:
This reads that Luna is the father of King Eos. Now, we know that's not the case. Might I suggest the following?
“I am Princess Luna, younger sister of Princess Celestia, Co-Regent of Equestria, Bearer of the Moon, Born of Queen Astraeus and Sired by King Eos.”
quotation after fight,"
shivers through the spine
"Sir
peace
Your Magesty
Once
They
Judging from the way only Flutters and Luna were wounded in the battle, it seems these Proletariat troops graduated from the Imperial Stormtrooper Marksmanship Academy, and given the relative difference in army sizes, that's probably a result of Conservation of Ninjutsu.
Or perhaps it was a...
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Big Mac truck.
The Sparity is strong with this fic.
Speaking of which, where was Shim Shady during all of this? I'd think she would've been an asset in the fight.
Hmm... who is this mystery mare that Blueballs porked for information on the Alicorn Amulet? Cloud Kicker? Pinkie? Marble Pie?
Oh, I'd be more than happy to mount you, Lyra.
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IIRC, that's deliberate on the part of the author. It's supposed to be how the Terran Empire spelled "alicorn."
7277373 7276566 Corrected!
7277533 1.) It's either that or politicians make poor soldiers. The veil Steven crafts couldn't be responsible for all that terrible markmanship…
2.) The Puns, they shall be the death of me…!
3.) You do not want to know what I have those two doing in my headcanon. Or maybe you do… -Cue "Bad Touch" by The Bloodhound Gang.-
4.) That is an excellent question. Where in the Hell was Shimmy during this fight?
5.) Here's a hint: The Lame and Impotent Mystery Mare
6.) Pfft. You would!
Sounds like Meghan has had a rough time of things. I hope we see more of her later.
7283955 I have some rather big plans for Meghan. You'll be seeing her again, trust me.
A human and a griffin escape from a whip wielding pony named Big Top. Can't remember the Griffin 's name, but do I see a nod to a story called Misunderstandings?
7286068... Mebbe...
Something only touched on lightly, if at all, during the inquiry was WHY Steve did what he did and WHAT would happen if he didn't. To the crux of their questioning, is Steve dangerous? Yes. But then, so too are Luna, Celestia, Twilight, and Cadence. They can do terrible things with the power at their disposal, but they would do so only if their ponies were threatened. Much in the way Steve did. Very few times dose anypony get that if fics. I wonder if it's a trend? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
7292058 IMHC, Celestia ha already received a suitable answer to that question from Lyra, Longbow, and her Partner. Even so, Luna has given the panel the last piece of that puzzle; also, Celestia is totally unconvinced about his motives. Because of her paranoia, she has kept plentiful tabs on Steven and her surveillance on the human mage will continue, even if he shows a purer heart than she gives him credit for...
Just what was the point of him losing his leg now he'll just be in the way he can't do anything it's weird
7319946 The idea was hobble him so he has to work harder to recover and this would make him strive to achieve a measure of sanity. You're going to see him doubt whether what's happening to me is real or delusion...
Alright makes sense
7324539 He could very well do that, too...
7343897 Oh, a fan of the late Robin Williams are we? I approve.
update soon please
hey awesome I'm actually born and raised from San Antonio myself.
7416833 Bexar County represent!
7456188 hey wait you live in Bexar County awesome gotta love Sa Town.
P.S. some of my friends still spell Bexar like Bear lol.
7456249 TBH, I was born in Bell County, lived for a short time in Bexar County, spent a few years in Lampasas County, and now live in Webb County. I've been damn near everywhere...
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7481212 You gonna carry on?
7571502 But of course! I'm midway through Chapter 41. I just recently moved to a new apartment, so there's no shortage of chaos in that, but I add to it whenever I can.
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Military Energy Gum is better. That stuff hits you like a freight train, and keeps you up and going for hours!
You can buy it on Amazon. Last time I bought a box it was $28 for 24 packs. Each pack only has 5 pieces in it, but given the health warning that says to not chew more than 4 pieces a day...
7708357 By the strictest definition, the Equestrian ponies are anthropomorphic. They speak, they've created an entire civilization, they are capable of human level problem solving. By all intents and purposes, they are anthropomorphic.
7731873 I'm glad Blueblood is stupid enough to forget that the band of the Alicorn Amulet was black, causing him to grab the golden one!