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And so the mystery deepens... What is House Proletariat's end game? Who can say? All that matters is their end.
Also, that wasn't murder, it was a declaration of war. For puppets of the enemy, best to put them out of their misery. It is the only merciful thing to do.
In any case, well done.
4457597 I was hoping somepony would see that! But for the Equestrians, their limited understanding of human nature means they're a way behind in the game. As for Proletariat, let's just say they may have been the basis for every tyrannical, fascist regime that has ever existed within human history…
4461272 why am I having a hard time remembering this story apparently I've read up to chp 20, and yet not one memory.
4461312 I think you were referencing an image I put up in the Author's Comments section of Chapter 14. It was an illustration of Princess Celestia and Princess Luna enacting a scene from The Empire Strikes Back.
4461321 I know that but I still don't remember ever reading this story like EVER Erich I'd weird cause your name and the title are familiar but that's it
4461334 Huh, weird. Well, maybe you should start over from the beginning. If you need a summary or synopsis, I can give you one.
4461340 that would be very much appreciated and don't tell anything after chapter 20
OH SHIT NOW I REMEMBER AFTER READING THE SUMMARY IT'S ALL COMING BACK TO ME NOW I DON'T KNOW WHY I STOPPED.....must've started reading something else waiting for a new chapter and forgot
4461344 okay.
No spoilers here…
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4461380 thanks but it all came back to me
4461396 Oh, good. I think what didn't help was that I took a week off from writing between Chpts. 20 & 21. I needed that time to formulate just where i was going with this narrative. (I did wonder where you went. It's unusual that you would stay silent for THAT long…)
How is this sci-fi at all?
4461494 I'm working up to it. The Terran Empire has tech that we, at current, can't even conceive of yet. Dyson's Spheres are only theoretical with our current technological level.
4461407 it's VERY UNUSUAL that I stay gone for a while I just got so involved in editing for my friend and reading this new twidash series that started 4 months ago but just got really involved into it about 2 to 3 months ago
4462715 Well, it's good to see you back. So, what say you on the story so far?
4465911 I like it it's different from what I normally read and in a good way change is healthy. I'm gonna need to do a recap cause I remember the big stuff but the small details that really affect the story I don't remember.
4465939 Okay, cool. WHile you do that, I'm going to finish Chpt. 26.
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Power hungry, control freaks; yup, you're right about that being similar to every fascist regime I've ever read about. Again well done.
4469492 Thank you! Next chapter is gonna be a lot more heart warming and a lot less politically intriguing.
"And people! We kill people! 'Cause they're pests! And, it's fun!"
- George Carlin, Back in Town
So, Republicans are like House Proletariats are we. Spoken like a true democrat, the devil would be proud. [Thumbs Down / Unfavorite]
4970061 You know, when i read this comment, I had an entire, rage filled rant I wanted to write. Thankfully, the more rational side of me won and I won't be turn into a stark raving mad rage monster. I will, on the other hand say the following for things:
First thing, from master storyteller Mark Twain: "It is better to keep your mouth closed and let people think you are a fool then to open it and remove all doubt."
Second thing, I don't ask anybrony to agree with politics or personal philosophies. You can disagree with anything I say and I shan't hold it against you.
Third thing, as the adage goes, "Assumption is the mother of all fuck ups." I have a few friends who are Republicans and are very decent people. I have to meet a political conservative, whether a Compassionate Conservative or a member of the "Tea Party" movement, that isn't some spoiled rotten, childish, dozy prat in the pockets of Major Industries trying to turn The United States into an oligarchy. Mind you, I have't much faith in Progressives, either. Their "solutions" to America's troubles are less than ideal.
Last thing: I find it highly amusing that this one little comment insults you. I'm a Latter Day Saint and my beliefs get ridiculed all the time. Do I take offense at those who mock my faith? Nope, I don't. Like unto the late Robin Williams:
I wouldn't be alive if I took offense to everything that comes out of some people's mouths. I would have had a heart attack a decade ago… Meditate on that, brony.
Why would he need to get the Siggie fixed? Didn't he get three more guns in the Ponyville attack?
Wow, all I can say is comparing republicans to die hard psychopaths is not cool. I got issues with both democrats and republicans but to illustrate them would start a flame war. One thing I will say is that I have been to a few tea party meetings. Yes there are a few nuts, but the vast majority wants nothing more than fiscal responsibility and limited government.
5631130 Well, a comparison could be made that the Grand Old Party has many members that act like spoiled, petulant children denied their way. The same could be said of the other major political party, too, but in my experience, it's only been the House of Elephants that has wrought havoc in the form of war. Is flame war likely? Maybe, but only to those whose vision is narrow and minds closed off. Steve and I are equal opportunity snarkers.
Why do I feel like making a CaptainSparklez refrence here?
6244995 I have no clue what you're talking about...
6260239 captain sparklez's minecraft music video, its called find the pieces on youtube.
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This Line gets to me
It isn't murder, it's self defense.
I like the story. The political commentary is the usual liberal/socialist (aka fascist) diatribe you hear on msnbc everyday. Less political satire and more fantasy please
7047779 You are going to hate the last phase of this. Chapters 91-100 are all about mocking the Libertarian/Conservative values. If that isn't in your wheelhouse, than brother, you've come to the wrong place. BY the way, I'm fairly certain you're using the word "fascist" wrong. Thanks for enjoying my story, thus far!
Just thinking about something, but...the whole crutches deal seemed to have been glossed over in the story, which is kind of a pity. I mean, most of the time I wasn't even thinking about how he had them. It just seemed like it could have been used more. But that's just my opinion.
7049092 good sir are u trying to kill me with adorabeties
Attribution error! He may have pulled the trigger, but the situation (orchestrated by another) demanded immediate and decisive action. If you wish to look for the guilty party, look for the orchestrator. Steven is guilty of no more than protecting himself and his.