This is the story of how PinkiePie, Rarity, Twilight Sparkle, and RainbowDash help a spotted, adolescent unicorn solve a big problem. This young mare was born in Canterlot, and moved to Ponyville with her "family" when she was still a young filly. Why'd I put the quotes around the word "family"? Because ever since her birth, she'd never belonged to this family in the first place. She was originally an alicorn! Read on as the pegasus, earth pony and unicorns help this fallen angel and put together the puzzle of a prophecy that even has to do with her and them! And afterwards, the spotted mare will come back for revenge on those who've tormented her in her mortal life in Equestria.
Chapters (5)
I don't think tragedy, dark, or sad go with comedy XD But apart from that, I love it!
Also, I love how you write RainbowDash so they don't change to Firefly XD
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lol x3 and i know they don't go together but isn't it an interesting mix?
I don't know why people don't like this. There may be some grammar errors or accedental letters, but this story is awesome.
When is chapter 4 coming out? Will it be tomorrow, this week, or just "soon"
lol actually, chapter 4 is being worked on atm.
and also, i've edited the other chapters and i'm making sure any grammor errors or typos (which apparently love me 
) are fixed. and i'm also working on the material and what's extra and what's not and what needs to be added. i'm still kind of an ametuer writer. 
I'll try to get the 4th chapter up a.s.a.p., but beware i am a draggers-out on things. 
I'm glad you really like this!
Judging from the story this is a horrible abomination, the comments say otherwise, while the rating also spells 'Horrible Abomination'. Im torn on whether I should read this to see if its really bad and risk a few brain cells or move on to another story. Im gonna go with plan B just because the authors profile is dead and thus she wouldn't be able to see the review anyways.
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You don't have to write that it contains swearing in the short description. Why not add a profanity tag instead?