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When There's Nothing Left

The past two years in Equestria have been gloomy ones. So many things have changed since The Event. An Earth Pony named Rocksmash is just a normal, everyday loyal subject of Princess Celestia. One night, however, he makes an unfortunate aquaintance and begins to learn the truth that is known by few.

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Art by Solomon: http://thesolomanz.deviantart.com/

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Prologue - A Dark Night · 9th Mar 2014 · 1,745 words
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Chapter 1 - Twilight's Story · 26th Jun 2014 · 5,265 words
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Nalis Faber

Nalis Faber #1 · Mar 9th, 2014 · · · Prologue - A Dark Night ·

I am currently working on the next chapter and it should come soon! Sorry about the suspence!

MilesMaster2006

MilesMaster2006 #2 · Mar 9th, 2014 · · · Prologue - A Dark Night ·

Interesting. Not bad so far!

Rinnaul

Rinnaul #3 · Mar 9th, 2014 · · · Prologue - A Dark Night ·

Interesting, definitely. Your language can get a little repetitive, and you could do with some more complex sentences, but it's no major detraction. But you have me curious about what's going on and what Twilight is scheming. I hope there's more to her than the usual grimdark Researcher Twilight, but even that might work well if the rest of the story is unique enough.

Will watch this.

Nalis Faber

Nalis Faber #4 · Mar 9th, 2014 · · · Prologue - A Dark Night ·

4054469 Thanks!

Nalis Faber

Nalis Faber #5 · Mar 9th, 2014 · · · Prologue - A Dark Night ·

4055062 I appreciate your input. The only way to get better is to listen to the criticism of others! I'm glad I've managed to captivate your curiosity, too!