• Published 21st Feb 2014
  • 1,484 Views, 17 Comments

The Wicked Revenge - FradUck



Queen Chrysalis seeks revenge on the ponies that stopped her evil plans.

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Comments ( 17 )

What you are writing, my friend, are called S.S.S.s: Super Short Chapters.
Don't get me wrong, it's better than staring at a text wall, but you need to lengthen-out.
(He-he, I made a funny:derpytongue2:)

3977160 Wouldn't the abbreviation be called S.S.C.s? :unsuresweetie:

3977237 Drat. Guess I'l have to say that he has had a S.S.S.S.F.
(Super Short Story So Far)

awesome chapters:pinkiehappy:

3978708 thank you :)

3977160 thanks for the feedback :) I'll work on the length of the chapters a lot more when I get the time :)

The best way to make the chapters longer is by
1. Not shoving five different thoughts into one sentence.
2. Adding more detail as to what's going on.

I love this so far. Keep it up :)

3988469 thank you! I'll do my best :)

What the fuck... that group xD

Comment posted by FradUck deleted Feb 25th, 2014

THE WAITING IS KILLING ME INSIDE!

4046157 Sorry I've just got such a busy schedule at the moment with college but I'll get around to writing it when I can!

What the buck

Just so you know, I'll be reading it when I see more chapters! Checking everyday till then ^_^

Just a hint, if you aren't gonna post chapters for a very long time, put your story on hiatus :ajsmug:

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