Now that Rainbow's b-day passed ,it's coming AJ's one .AJ gave her a nice gift but Rainbow wanted another thing, and that thing will be Rainbow's gift for Applejack.
I have to thank Crab Spy for the help with the mistakes . Follow Crab Spy :)
Sorry for the bad English :) . AppleDash fanfic .
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Not too shabby for your first fic, but there's a ton of cleaning up and polishing to do.
A good proofreader'll fix that right up.
Yes I know , I am so sorry
but I 'm Romanian not English 
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There is a group on here that can help you clean up the spelling and grammar mistakes in your story. I like this premise though and i like to see more from you.