Wolves In Sheep's Clothing
I traveled alongside Blueblood, from the castle down into the city proper. Fortunately, I did not attract the stares of the high society ponies, as they were all far too busy raising their noses into the air as high as physically possible. This actually made the endeavor far easier, from my perspective. Less questions to be answered. Several of them greeted the Prince cordially, and those that did seemed somewhat confused by my presence. Given my own air of refinement, and that I was far taller than most of them yet moved with unseemly grace, they didn't seem to take offense to my presence. We eventually reached the club, and after the Prince entered, I was prevented from doing so by the bodyguards. Royal guards, actually, in their shimmering golden armor.
"I don't believe I have seen you before." One of the guards stated. They all look the same, which I've learned is due to an enchantment on their armor, nevertheless, they are quite imposing. Wanting to quickly move past this obstacle, I greeted them.
"Forgive my manners. I am Lark Wolfe, musician extraordinaire. I am here in the company of his highness Prince Blueblood, in order to display my musical talents." With a sweeping bow, I presented the calling card he gave me to their eye level. They seemed to scrutinize it for a moment, most likely for legitimacy, before they stepped to the side and allowed me entry. This must certainly be a prestigious event if it warrants using royal guards to keep out the riff raff.
"Ah, the guards didn't give you any trouble did they?" The prince asked when I entered. He was standing among a group of others, each looking equally refined.
"Oh no. they were quite civil actually. Perhaps introductions are in order?" I repeated my introduction, followed by the remainder of the group. A white unicorn stallion with a mustache and monocle, named 'Fancy Pants', another white unicorn, a mare, named Fleur du Lis, a grey earth pony mare named Octavia, a blue minotaur named Iron Will who, despite the name and stature, spoke softly and with refinement. Also among the group was a diamond dog in a suit and tie named Gram-el, and a one of the serpent folk, indeed, a 'Naga' called Varoush, wearing colourful desert garb. With the introductions done, we moved to sit at a table near the stage, where an orchestra was playing.
"Quite a, varied, ensemble if I must say so myself." The Prince was quick to point out. "What matters here is not race, but refinement. This is where foreign relations are strengthened, deals are made, and public image is set. Wealth changes hooves, businesses are born... and die, and the creme de la creme of Equestria make themselves known."
"Indeed. I have seen many in this world, from my travels across the sands, though I have yet to see one such as yourself." Varoush spoke in a thick accent. Husky, yet moderate in tone, like his speech was molded and worn like the sands he traveled. "If you would not take offense, what are you?"
"A traveler, from the land of men. Specifically, England. Brought to this world through magical means. You would not find another like me in all the nations, and that suits me."
"I see." Came the minotaur's deep voice. "And how do you make your fortune?"
"Well, violinist is my calling, and wandering minstrel is my trade. I usually play in the courts of nobles. This brought me quite a fortune, though, for the moment, I live in the castle in the service of Princess Luna. I had no need of my wealth, so I gave it to the less fortunate. I have no need of mansions, as traveling usually entails not having a place to call home. For immediate needs, I can always make enough where I am to satisfy."
"Ahh, kindness and generosity. Were it not for these, I'd still be trying to scrape together a meager living, selling self help advice." The blue giant's chuckles boomed. "That was before I found my true calling. Monster hunter. And tamer, I suppose. I make the world safe, and collect ingredients from dangerous creatures for rare medicines and the like. It has brought me quite the fortune."
"Well, as long as you don't try hunting Lark, I don't see any reason why you two shouldn't get along." Blueblood joked.
"Why would I do that?" Iron looked at me questioningly.
'Blueblood you OAF! Blast, now I have to explain.'
"Part of the reason I am in Luna's service is I owe her a great debt. She helped me to tame the monster within. Though they have been extinct for the past thousand years or so, in my homeland, lycans are alive and well." There really is no use hiding it. Lying to the people will just make them doubt me. If they know what I am, and yet still conduct myself in a manner of decorum, then it'll make it easier to accept than keeping it a secret.
"Ahh. There are no worries then. A monster isn't a monster if they're civil." Fancypants spoke up. "Isn't that right Fleur darling?" Now I'm confused. Something with Fleur?
The bleached unicorn mare smiled at me, and in that instant, it took all that I had to not turn right then and there and rip her throat out with my teeth. At first, it was a normal smile, but for a few mere moments, fangs sprouted from her gums before retreating.
"You are...."
"A vampony, yes." She replied in a thick french accent. My eyes shot wide. Wait. No aura of evil. No sense of impending doom. No dark magic at all.
"You seem troubled?" She half stated, half questioned.
"Ah, um, Pardonnez-moi, mais, dans mon monde, les vampires sont des monstres horribles, créé par la magie noire. J'ai eu de mauvaises expériences avec eux. C'est la raison de ma.... inquiétude."
"Vous parlez français? Le vampirisme ne se propage pas par morsure ici, et c'est une maladie, pas une malédiction, tout comme la lycanthropie du passé." She explained. I see, so instead of a bite, it is transferred by blood contact perhaps?
"Also, you do not need speak french for my comfort. You see, this League of Dapper Gentlecolts is not exactly what it seems. There are many normal ponies here, but for the most part, it is a club for monsters. Iron Will, as you see, is a minotaur, Varoush is a naga, I am a vampony, and you are a werewolf. The vamponies of Equestria can live in sunlight, for a time after recently feeding. Mon beau, Fancypants, is kind enough to provide for my needs." She kissed his neck with a hint of hunger in her eyes before backing off.
"Prince Blueblood..... why did you not...."
"I know how you feel about such things, and I was afraid if I told you, you wouldn't come. It would do you well to get out of the castle, and out from under Luna's eye for a while."
"Do the princesses know of this?"
"Yes, they know. It's one of Canterlot's well kept secrets. Hence the royal guards instead of regular bouncers. This club is proof to the world that the fear mongering stereotypes that most ponies hold in their hearts are absolute rubbish. Many so called 'monsters' come here, and engage in perfectly reasonable affairs that do not involve kidnapping, killing, or eating ponies. In fact, Princess Luna herself frequents this place, although not tonight. I figured you could use some time off from courting her. Or rather, trying to avoid courting her." He laughed. the others looked downright shocked.
"Oh? Did I not tell you? I could have sworn I had..." Blueblood laughed nervously. "Lark, you know the details better than I. Care to explain?"
"Well, due to a cultural misunderstanding and a visit from Rothak, king of the diamond dogs, Princess Luna and I were to engage in mock courtship to overcome an international treaty stating that canines must submit themselves to the king. Except it seems the princess has become smitten with me, and now I'm stuck courting her. This would be no trouble, except that she spent nearly a year treating me like a pet to help me control my instincts, and other than that I spent about a week in the country. I may well have just arrived. I am not yet ready for a relationship, let alone one with royalty. I figure she has a very long time left to live, I do not, so it may not work. If it doesn't, she has a great deal of time left to find another whom her heart desires." The guests just nodded sagely.
"If it's any consolation, you're always welcome here. Such manners and decorum are always refreshing." Octavia, who is just a normal pony, stated in a classy voice. "But, for now, perhaps you'd like to come on stage? It is about time to begin the next song, and you would make an excellent addition." I removed my polished instrument from it's case, inspected it for damage, followed up with the bow, to which I applied rosin and pulled it across the strings a few times to remove the excess, before wiping down the instrument to remove the detritus. "I see you take great care of your instrument. I cannot wait to hear how it sounds. Come, let us play."
Oooh an Equestrian League of Extraordinary Gentlemen. Nice.
Is there an invisible one?
I'm glad someone else besides myself remembers Naga exist, they are some of the more unique creatures available., and a desert dweller to boot. I like it very much.
I'm not sure if it's an error or just how Blueblood speaks, probably not.
Other than that I thought this was pretty good.
-Sturrn
...wow, I don't know what to say about this chapter, except
Fine chapter my good gentlecolt, fine chapter indeed
1501050 its actually pretty common
That music was quite soothing.
And literally this appears right as i try to go to sleep not that I'm complaining or anything
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I am deeply impressed with you, BlackWing. You were able to find a song that prominently features the violin and bass, but you did so in a piece where it is irrelevant whether or not the bass or cello is played, and other instruments can be there but don't have to be. That is amazing in and of itself, but I do have one question... who's the other violinist? It can be played with as little as two violinists and a low instrument, (cello, bass, bassoon if you're feeling a little daring) and as many extra strings and harpsichords as you care to add, but there still needs to be at least one other good violinist. I request a paragraph or two in the next chapter wherein Larke is introduced to his accompaniment.
I know this is a bit nit picky, but given Octavia's a high class musician, she would never refer to classical or baroque piece as a "song."
You see, a song means it is primarily sung. By definition, instrumental pieces are not songs. I can understand the misconception, however, given that most folks, who aren't music-savvy people, use the term very liberally.
aren't werewolves immortal, or at least to be very, very old. i mean in the legends of them it states one of those
1501016 Yeah, she has yet to make an appearance though.
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Or perhaps it is that I don't? :D
Fleur as a vampyire? That's actully quite fitting.
nice chapter but for the french part, did you di it by yourself or you used a software. juste pour savoir parce que je suis moi meme francais (plutot quebecois mais ces pareil) XD
Wow. tu parles francaise? Je ne savais pas. tu parles francaise dans un recit Griffin the Griffin quand griffin a parle a Princess Candance. Well back to english. WHen I read this chapter I got the thinking of the Twilight saga vibe with all these monsters...I don't know why...Anyway I look forward to seeing where the monster direction is going and hope that something else will pop up. oh and the Naga...Does MLP have naga in their show...I'm not sure if they did or didn't
1503680 Mais non. J'étudié le français pour un long temps, mais mon professeur venait du France. J'utilise Google traduction pour plus de simplicité, mais je sais la langue aussi. For the rest of you, I know the language, although between the French and Quebec versions, as well as past tense I have difficulty in, so I just used google translate. I can read it and speak it, but listening or writing it I get wrong because I confuse my tenses, and french people speak fast.
1503918 No, they don't. At least not yet. There IS however a 'bubble drawing' (like a stick figure, except instead of just the frame, it's just the outline. Kind of like the shape of a cookie cutter) of a human in Pound Cake and Pumpkin Cake's room, on the wall. Therefore, ponies know what humans are.
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1504135 Wow...didn't know that...very useful...Along with the french, I took four years of it but still have trouble writing it out. I learned french formal and not the qubec version.
1504219 that dont have a so much diference between the quebec and france version, is just that the quebec version is like 20% badass
1504269 And my 'France' french teacher would soundly disagree with you.
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Excellent! Vampony, Lycan, Minotaur, and Naga all in the same place. A wonderful chapter.
1508274 .......... No. Just.. no.
1503354 What? An invisible pony not making an appearance?
Such a thing is unheard of!
1504123 C'est très admirable. Est-ce que je peux-te poser une question?
Où habitez-vous? Vous avez dit que tu habiter dans la Canada. Mais où dans la Canada?
1517943 Dans Ontario.
1518193 Hmmm... Au Toronto? Ou au Ottawa?
1518209 Pa l'un ou d'autre. Region Niagara.
1518222 Oh, J'adore la Niagra! Est-ce que vous a visiter la <<Niagra Falls>>?
1518244 Yeah, I've been there. I'm in the Niagara region, but I'm actually a little ways from the city. Still, when you don't have to travel very far to get to it, the novelty wears off.
1518263 ....I guess...I live in Montreal, so I've only gone...four...maybe five times....Considering I'm thirteen, It's actually a lot now that I think about it...
1518278 Also.
Les ananas ne saut pas en parachute.
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You gonna tell him he can't go skydiving?
1518388 ...What?
1518403 It's an old french program from the 80's called 'Telefrancais' which was used to help kids learn french. It featured a talking, dancing, skydiving pineapple, and two kids who spent the majority of the time going 'Wtf? Pineapples can't do that!' And then he'd do it anyways. Also, that face is creepy. Also, there was a band of musical skeletons, 'Les Skellettes' and a detective, "Monsoieu Pourquoi" 'Mr. Why' who is always solving 'Le grand crime' not A big crime, THE big crime.
1518458 I listen to black keys while talking to you.
IRRELEVANT DETAILS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I enjoy the refined tastes of said chapter.
T'was quite exquisite.
League of Dapper Gentlecolts
I knew I should've seen something in this name...
Will Sean Connery play Blueblood ?
Forgive me, but in my world, vampires are horrible monsters, created by black magic. I had bad experiences with them. This is the reason for my .... concern. "
You speak French? Vampirism is not spread by the bite here, and it is a disease, not a curse, as lycanthropy pitch.
Dude you didn't even let them try at the relationship WHAT is wrong with you???
Also, why are you purposely changing around the personalities of the characters from the show?
1503068 I think you have confused vampires and werewolves there, no offense.
They should re name the league to "The League of Abnormal Badasses" either that or form the equivalent of the Avengers while fighting crime
huh..... first fic I've read that doesn't portray Blueblood as a pompous jackass
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Because he can?
2969716 BEST LINES EVER SPOKEN IN HISTORY.
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