The war between the Equestrian army and the Rebels has been going on for far too long, the Rebels are looking for a fast way out, a bio weapon that could change the future of Equestria, forever. Lieutenant Stryker Bolt and a small task force have been assigned to disable this chemical weapon at all costs. Failure is not an option. What they don't know is that the gas does something darker than just kill ponies.
if you haven't guessed from the description this is a zombie apocalyptic scenario based in a futuristic Equestria that is run through military, the monarchy the the princesses had has been replaced by a military oligarchy. Someponies didn't like the military doing this so they broke off and formed the Equestrian Rebels.
This story used to be called The Unexpected Disease but since i progressed it too fast and screwed up TERRIBLY i have rewritten it.
A few grammar issues, like 'ill' should be 'I'll' when saying 'I will.' and same with the context of 'your'
Good story so far, I'll follow it for now. Just work on context and use of apostrophe's.
3805706 Okay, thanks! I'll make sure to go back and fix those!
3806152 Good. Remember, if you ever need help with grammar and context, just google it or ask someone.