• Published 20th Jan 2014
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Spike Cooper and the Equis Deib - the ninja king



Spike, Twilight, and Pinkie Pie have to get something that belonged to him form the fiendish five. All being cashed by inspector Applejack

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The Police Station

It was a dark night and rough at Canterlot and there was a shadowy figure running across the roof tops. The figure put its back on a wall, then continued to walk across a nearby ledge. While on the ledge, it went past a window booming with lights and extravagant myriads of color. The light reveled it to be a dragon with purple and green scales, along with a black mask across his eyes and a blue hat, shirt, shoes, gloves, and a red back pack slung over him. As he perched himself over the ledge, he used his cane to balance himself casually. He looked over at the corner to see a sign that says: Police Station. He jumped across and on the sign, then continued to jump onto a nearby roof. When he landed, he pulled out a pair of binoculars.

"Spike! Spike! Can you read me?" A quick chirping voice yelped through Spike’s communicator.

"Yes, I read you Twilight. Loud and clear. Did I mention loud?" The dragon said.

"Sorry Spike, breaking into police head quarters does that." Twilight apologized.

"What are you talking about!? I am the thief hear! You’re safe in the van."

"Well just remember I am your I eyes and ears. To get, in use the air vent near you."

"Finally I will get my file form Inspector Applejack and get back what was stolen from me." Then Twilight’s picture was replaced by a pink haired girl who’s smile seems to run for days.

"Don't worry Spike, when you come out we will be in the van waiting for you." She said

"Just keep that engine running Pinkie." Spike said before putting the binoculars in his backpack.'Ok hear we go.' Spike thought.

He ran to a near by water tower and put his back and started to walk a cross it. When he circled around the tower he went and hit the metal bars that was preventing Spike entering the air vents.He walked trough the vents to be stooped buy security lasers.

"Be carful, Spike! One touch with one of those lasers and you will set of the alarm!" Twilight warned.

"Got it. Touchy lasers, bad. No touchy, good.” Spike said.

'Huh, there are platforms. I could land on them to get past the lasers.' Spike thought. He landed on all of the platforms, and when he got to the bottom, he found a gate that blocked his path.

"Don't worry Spike, I got this!" Twilight said. In a few minutes the gate that was blocking Spike's path was open.

"Thanks, Twi." He said while entering the police station.

"Inceptor Applejack's office should be red." Twilight said.

"She always fancied the red…” Spike said. He looked around for a while until he found a red door. "Found it, Twi."

"it is extra reenforced, so you better find a other way in Spike."

"Good, I hate red." Spike mumbled while looking around for a way in. 'Ha! a window.' Spike thought. He went on the balcony and put his back on the wall, then continued to walk over to Applejack's office. When he got to the office he conveniently found a safe.

"Ok Spike, go the safe and enter 3-5-1" Twilight said.

Spike sighed, then went to the sigh. '3-5-1...Such a boring combination.' He thought to himself as it opened to his whim. When it opened, it revealed a file which he immediately snagged, then placed his signature dragon-face mannequin inside.

"Spike head down the fire exit, then down the parking lot to the get-a-way van. It will be waiting for you." Pinkie Pie said.

"Sounds like tons of fun." Spike said. He walked over to the fire escape but only to be stopped by a laser blast from a shock pistol from a near by roof.

"Aw, shucks; I missed!" Shouted a southern girl wearing long jeans a black shirt.

"I was wondering when you‘d show up, AJ! You know that pistol really brings out your eyes." Spike said in a romantic tone.

"Very funny, little guy.”

"…That’s the best you got? Why not lizard, or snake? Little guy? Ha!” he said in a mocking tone.

"You know what? Lizard is a much better name for you. You still have to be arrested for what happened in Saddle Arabia!" She shouted.

"Well first you have to get me." Spike said before running down the fire escape.

AppleJack attempted to fire on the ‘Lizard’, however he proved to have the upper hand with his speed. When Spike landed on the ground, he saw the van with a lot of cop cars and a green van with its back open.'This is getting to easy.' he thought.

"You aren't getting’ away that easily!" The inspector yelled form a tall pillar at the parking lot. Spike only chuckled at her assumption and started to run towards the van. Spike went over the cop cars, avoiding the Inspector’s well-placed shots.

"I will get you Cooper!" Applejack shouted before the back of the van closed, then sped off.
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Spike's P.O.V.

Finally me and my gang gave inceptor Applejack the slip. I climbed and sat next to Pinkie Pie who was driving and Twilight who was in the back of the van.

I showed our prize to them.

Finally with this file I can get back my family's most prized treasure. You see, I come form a long line of master thieves. We rote our skills down into an ancient book: Equis Deib. Whoever read it learned to be extremely sneaky. Because of it, we specialize in stealing form thieves because there’s no honor, no challenge, and no fun stealing form normal people.

On the night I was supposed to inherent the book, five visitors came unannounced at our door and they called themselves the Fiendish Five.

I was hiding in the closet with my mom's cane watching my family getting murdered. They ransacked the house, until they took down the picture of me, my mom, and my dad.

It had a safe behind it. They cracked it easily, and what they found in the safe was the one and only Equis Deib.

It got into their filthy hands. Those filthy, awful, grubby hands. I watched them split the book up and went all over the world to commit horrid crimes.

I was dumped at the town orphanage and that's where I met to ladies who would become my life long friends.

Twilight Sparkle: Magic, Technological and strangest supreme.

Pinkie Pie: Driver and Full-time party lover.

Together we will avenge my mom and get back the Equis Deib…Or fail and let my family name bite the dust.

Author's Note:

Yes first fanfic! Just to let every one know I am vary bad at spelling and grammar so if their is any errors PM me. Also I am stumped who shod be Spike's foe's but I all ready have some charters picked out hear they are.
Sly Cooper---Spike
Bentley---- Twilight Sparkle
Murray---- Pinkie Pie
Sly's Dad---- Celestia
Carmelita--- Applejack
Sir Ralegh--- ?
Mugshot--- Bulk biceps
Mz. Ruby--- Might do zecora
The Panda King--- ?
Clock Work--- King Sombra
If you have questions about the carters ask in the Comments or PM me I will happily answer any of your questions about the charters in Sly Cooper. If you want to suggest a carter to be in it just say who are the repenting.

Editor by WhatMakesRainbow

Comments ( 42 )

An important note:

Spike Copper and the Equis Deib

Hi my name is Spike Cooper.

Not a good way to make a first impression. You should go find help regarding the rest of your grammar as well.

3814610 Point it out in and send me a PM ok?:ajbemused:

3814648
By presenting your story to the masses, you agree to criticism that will be done publicly through the comments section. It's just the way things work.

Besides, anyone with the sense to see those issues is already thinking the same thing.

3814670 Just tell me where to edit i will will do it! and if you read my note I said I am BAD at grammar and spelling!

3814695
It's not just in certain parts; it's scattered all over. It's the job of an editor for this.

Also, for the record, I did not rate your story.

3814706 Oh. Do you want to be my editor?

3814710
Too busy to be an editor. You can go look for groups though that do it though.

3814716 Oh. But thank you for trying.

3814695 the frog can be blueblood and the Panda king can be NNM becuse of sly 3 when panda king joins the cooper gang or he can be Discord. also Ruby could be Trix becuse of the show boteing while zecora can be the guru from sly 3

3814733 I will think about it. and who is NNM?

Not bad idea, spelling could use some work.

3814879 If want to help with the spelling you can become my editor.

3814995 It means that I applaude just for using that video game. It's the best game ever. However, if you were to do a crossover for it, I would make Rainbow Dash as Sly, Twilight as Bently (Yeah, you got that right), and Applejack as Murray. As for Carmelita... I don't know. MLP X Sly Cooper really isn't that doable.

None the less, you're awesome for liking Sly Cooper

I'm going to say BOO YAH just for the fact you're attempting a Sly Cooper deal and because I fucking LOVE Sly Cooper...I'll do your editing. :twistnerd:

3815218 Ok! PM all off my mistakes and I will also give you the password to look at my newest chapters.

3815296

alright, sure thing my man! I'll tell you what, I'll just copy and paste the one with all the mistakes corrected! That way, you only have to copy and paste! :scootangel:

I'll get on it right away then. :moustache:

3814932 I'll be happy to help with the spelling but I'm not that good with grammar.

a SLY COOPER CROSSOVER AWESOME

Panda king = Fancy pants

Sir Ralegh = Blue blod

3816365 Do you know any good places for each of the fiendish five can be in? (any one can answer)

3814932 May I be your editor? I'm a fast typer and an amazing speller! :twistnerd: Also Sly Cooper FTW.

3817773 sorry I all ready have an editor but you can help me for locashions in the story

3817807 Are you sure? :fluttercry: You can have more than one editor.

I don't know about the locations.

3817852 Do you want to be my backup editor like when WhatMakesRainBows can't. Or you can do it together but you have to contact him if you want to work as one.

3817381
Bulk biceps can be in Las Pegasus (las vegas)
zecora will be in Everfree forest

3817889 Well look on the bright side didn't say no.

3815008
If Rainbow was to be Sly, then Sorin should be Carmelita.

Not bad, but the grammar is a little all over the place, for example Spike Copper, shouldn't it be Spike Cooper? Just saying that you have a crossover idea I haven't seen before, which is unique and pretty cool

5577771 I never noted that thanks! Do you wan't to be my new editor?

5579100 I'm sorry, I wish I could, but there are tests coming up at school and I need all the time I can get

5579104 well, not right now but later.

5579118 got it, can you PM me when you are ready?

What happens next?! When are you coming back?! Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

We need more(maybe check first chapter to see if you want to update)

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