The hidden life of the Voodoopunks within the society of Equestria.
Voodoopunks are from the musical plays written by Paul Shapera, first appearing in The Dolls of New Albion, and reappearing in The New Albion Radio Hour. This is only a semi crossover with the Tales of New Albion, where only the prologue even is apart of the original story, but where instead some of the Voodoopunks leave New Albion. That's where the crossover ends mostly, with only Dolls and the term "Voodoopunk(s)" are used through out.
Chapters (4)
Please leave criticism and comments about this chapter and future chapters to come, or leave suggestion of where or how I should proceed. I'll try and keep this going for as much as possible with my next College Quarter starting in 2 weeks.
Not bad
You need to work on your story telling, it seems like it was just pieced together rather quickly, and it seems kinda rushed.
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The first chapter is mostly done that way due to it being a listing of events that took place over 1000 years
and i'm not even good at English.... i'm a programmer and my strong suit is math and science
Sorry all for slow progress on the next chapter. I've haven't had the time, let alone any ideas on how to continue. Classes have been taking out a lot of my time and giving me story lock. Next quarter will still not be any better with 4 days of night classes in a row. Again if anyone wants to you can send me messages with anything regarding future progress or ideas of where you'd think would be best to continue the story. And thanks for reading!
(2/22/14)
winter quarter ends (3/29/14)
4 classes, length 4 hours (1pm - 5pm)mon,fri & (6pm -10pm)thurs,fri
spring quarter begins (4/7/14)
4 classes, length 4 hours (6pm - 10pm)mon-thurs
Will be working on the next chapter or two starting this weekend and the following week due to me being on break after today (Friday 28). Be prepared to see the next chapter soon! Will be working on the story with another brony friend who's coming down for a few days. As always send comments or suggestions for how it should continue!
New Chapter posted!