an event that pony call skyfall When ponies came down from the sky and attack innocent ponies of Equestria. for just five ponies.
(is my first fanfic some criticism will be good)
an event that pony call skyfall When ponies came down from the sky and attack innocent ponies of Equestria. for just five ponies.
(is my first fanfic some criticism will be good)
I think you definitely need a proof reader, is English your first language?