• Published 1st Jan 2014
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The SLENDERMANE and the eight pages - Fire-D-Brony



The Slendermane is a ruthless creature, so many secrets of it have been undiscovered, but the Cutie mark crusaders will find out very soon.......VERY soon

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5: Cave dwellers

As this Ditch that Applebloom and Scootaloo fell in did not feel like a normal ditch it was a very deep, that's for sure. Scootaloo turned

to Applebloom "Hey, this ditch is very strange, don't you think?" Applebloom had to agree that there was something odd about this

area, "Well, what do you think we should do?" Applebloom said. But the ditch was deep and long, so long that it had a path leading

somewhere, so the two fillies had the bright idea of slowly following the path, just after a few minutes they found a cave,

"Uh Applebloom did you see a cave here before?", Applebloom looked at Scootaloo, "No, i didn't see any cave here" so the Scootaloo

and Applebloom both thought that the Slendermane could be living in here, because they saw a strange shape on the side that was his

Cutie mark, the Shape was a circle with an cross, and Applebloom and Scootaloo both thought that the Slendermane

took Sweetie belle and Twilight in there. "Hey Applebloom, do you think they are in there" Scootaloo said, Applebloom was in thought

of another plan "I don't know, but we better get help because that thing is going to hunt us down!", Scootaloo scowled "Applebloom

there is no time, we have to get Twilight and Sweetie belle NOW!" The sound of Scootaloo's yell echoed around the forest, then there was silence,

but not for long.

Scootaloo and Applebloom heard Hoof steps coming from the forest, they both go the bright idea of trotting to the cave.

The two fillies were now in the cave, they had no idea were they were going, but all those two know that, were they were was the danger zone

this cave that they were in was no ordinary cave, it had red marking on it saying "Help" "Don't enter" and "Tread lightly"

"Hey Scootaloo, is this the best idea we could come up with?" Scootaloo at this point didn't know how to respond, "Well...it's all we can do"

They have been walking around the Cave for an hour and had no idea on what to do, then they both cane to an unusual area, it was very open the biggest part of the cave in fact,

"Applebloom, do you have the torch?" Scootaloo asked, "Um...got it" Applebloom then tossed the Torch at Scootaloo,

Scootaloo caught it and turned it on, what they could see were Pony bodies hanging from chains their eyes were black

their mouths were gone, Applebloom looked around in fear, hoping that Sweetie belle and Twilight did not end up the same way

then thank Celestia Twilight and Sweetie Belle were OK, but it looked like that they were knocked out, "There they are!"

Applebloom shouted, Scootaloo covered Applebloom's mouth "Shh, we don't want to end up like them, do we?"

Scootaloo pointed to the dead bodies. Applebloom Nodded "Your right" The two fillies trotted up to Sweetie Belle and Twilight,

Scootaloo tapped Sweetie belles head trying to wake her up "Sweetie Belle?" AppleBloom Looked at Sweetie Belle and then punched her arm "Wake up!"

"Sweetie Belle? Twilight? are you two wake?!" Scootaloo shouted but then AppleBloom Shouted as loud as she could

"GOSH DARN IT YOU TWO WAKE UP!" then there was a silence for 3 second and finally twilight and Sweetie Belle woke up

"Huh, what...what happened?" Twilight asked Sweetie Belle woke up and looked all over the place "Ahh, whats going on?"

Twilight used one of her spells to get her out of the chains she did the same with Sweetie Belle, "Applebloom? Scootaloo?

what happened?" Twilight was so confused but AppleBloom and Scootaloo both wanted to say something to Twilight,

"Twlight we are sorry we dragged you into this, we just wanted our Cutie marks so badly" Twilight Smiled and said "You know, there is no such thing as a perfect accomplishment we all had 3 more notes to find and got caught, but i'm just glad your all safe"

So Twilight and the CMC all hugged

but were there reunion was rudely interrupted, by a crash of some rocks, and you know who was there!

Twilight put her arm out in front of the Three little fillies "Girls, get behind me!" The SLENDERMANE was back!

The Slendermane walked slowly towards Twilight and then looked down to her and stared at her

with nothing to stare with just that eternal blank expression Then Twilight stared talking with the Slendermane

"Now listen here you can't just go around the Everfree forest and capture ponies whenever you feel like it!"

The Slendermane looked at her for a while and then was about to walk off but then Grabbed Twilight, Twilight was unable to move

then she stared to feel weird. the Slendermane was Sucking Twilight's Life out, The CMC had no idea on what to do then

Applebloom shouted "HEY LET HER GO YOU...YOU...SKINNY FUCK"

Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo's jaws dropped, then The Slendermane stopped and dropped Twilight and walked up to AppleBloom

The CMC were corned, but Princess Luna lowered the moon and Celestia raised the sun and the Slendermane Vanished, he only came out at night

The CMC saw Twilight's Body lie on the Ground they rushed over to her,

Scootaloo Checked Twilight's pulse...There was none

Sweetie Belle Pressed her Chest...Twilight did not move

Applebloom nugged Twilight...She did not move

Twilight Sparkle was Dead

Comments ( 20 )

Twilight Sparkle was Dead

Well that's just fantastic!! Just what they needed to see. Everything's just HUNKY DORY for them tonight, huh?! :pinkiecrazy:

On the other hand, WHY?!?! :apple cry: :fluttershbad: :fluttercry: :raritycry: :raritydespair:

On the other other hand, wow Apple Bloom. We need to get the soap and brush.

And on the last other hand, um… I got nothing. :derpytongue2:

3870645 I was just improvising :twilightblush: mostly

3870558 OH NO WHY?! WHY MUST YOU WRITE CDO?! I DON'T KNOW IF YOU'RE TRYING TO MAKE ME FLIP OUT BUT YOU DID IT! :twilightangry2:

3870663 Im not trying anything, this is my first Fan fic and it's not easy,

3870670 I know that feel bro. It's not easy but, BUT, you can overcome it. :ajsmug: I have faith in you. :pinkiesmile:

On the other hand (yes I'm doing this again), not to be rude, but um… how do I put this in the nicest terms possible? Oh man this is hard. :fluttershyouch: OK I'm going to be flat out with this, but that CDO comment wasn't meant towards you. It was meant towards THAT GUY! 3870558 :twilightangry2:

3870703 it Ok, and thanks for having faith in me :pinkiehappy:

3870718 how could you kill twilight now everybodies gonna go to pinkie pie for answers and celestia knows what's gonna happen if the cmc survive all i am gonna say is this....TO THE MOON!

3870959 ...its a fan fic you can do what ever you want

3870964 really even if that's to destroy slendermane by saying his name backwards enamrednels yay i beat herobaine!

3871101 i won that means i get a free wish from shenron now i can enjoy my muffin button without worry!

3871566 oooooh cupcakes! I like chocolate flavored ones. do you like cupcakes? There good but i prefer donuts personally. when i said his name backwards i unmade him. do you think that timey-whimy is a made up science like ectopsycology or nutmeg? How much wood can a woodchuck chuck? i bet fluttershy knows! You know you're being very rude not contributing to the conversation. ICE CREAM YAY!

3885670 yay i randomed you into submitting now i get a cookie a caramel coconut chocolate covered cookie the cookie of king for he who eats this cookie shall have his power!!!

3886319 ....You've broken me :twilightangry2:

3886340 yay now I'm a god of chaos lets celebrate sing it if ya know it chocolate rain!

Great Story so far i like it but at the end of Chapter 5 is the part that i don't like that much but still its very interesting i can't wait to read more of it. :pinkiehappy:

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