An earth pony named Snowday,a unicorn named Rex,and a Pegasis named Skipper plan a friendly get-together at Ponyville, but when a mysterious apple trophy is lost in the forest by the Cutie Mark Crusaders,these three friends go into the forest to retrieve it for them.Soon they will find out that is no ordinary trophy;thier friendship, as well as thier lives, will be put to the test. Discontent and jealousy will put a strain on them as they fight through the darkness to find this apple, because once they start this journey, they will find that they cannot stop.
They will either WORK together...or DIE together.
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Ow. Too bad speeling grammar and.
Punctuation rule #1: Put spaces after every single punctuation mark you use. The only exception to this rule is if you have two punctuation marks adjacent to each other. "For if you put a space between punctuation marks, it just looks weird," Banjo said.
330933 I know, but I was in a massive rush to finish. I had to basically rewrite the whole thing because when I uploaded it, a bunch of stuff that wasn't supposed to be there showed up. Next time will have improvements. So, what did you think?
My own bit of advice for someone reading this, if it looks "Super Over Spaced", try setting letter size to small, cleans it right up.