I remember what happened after TD drank the antidote. Or rather, what didn't happen. He didn't show any signs of anger. No surprise, no resentment. Maybe it was because the poison took a passive effect on TD because it was different from the original. Maybe TD did a good job in hiding his emotions. I honestly don't know. We chatted some more after that and he left for his hotel to pack up and leave for the train station.
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Six Months Later
“Sister, art thou ready for the Gala?” Luna asked as she walked into my room.
“Yes Luna, I am ready,” I replied.
“Is everything alright? Dost thou need anything?”
“No Luna, I am fine. Thank you.”
Seeing I had nothing to ask for, Luna walked out of the room. It had been half a year since our break up yet she was still looking over me as if I was heartbroken. True, even though my relationship with TD ended on a splendid note, I still cried that night after he left the castle. Getting over him took months, but eventually I was back to myself.
A while later, I was at the Gala hall, watching ponies walk in side where I greeted them. The Elements of Harmony were already here, and Twilight was by my side as we greeted each guest. The process of greeting ponies was repetitive and boring. I soon found my mind drifting off to other places. I remembered the time I spent with TD, the dates we went to and the laughs we shared. I was snapped back into reality by a familiar voice.
“Hello? Earth to Celestia. Anybody home?”
TD was in front of me in a suit. The guests stared at him in shock remembering the stunt he pulled in the last Gala. Even the Elements of Harmony were surprised by his unsuspected appearance. Before anypony could interject, I smiled brightly at TD trying to hold my inner filly from running loose. “Welcome to the Gala, TD.” I said in my rehearsed tone.
“So you’re probably busy now,” he said, “but maybe we can catch up later?”
“I will be looking forward to it.”
“Great. Catch you later.” And he walked to the bar wearing that same cheerful yet contagious smile on his face.
wait what?
did you re-do the chapter?
4086904 I just cut the last chapter in half and added a new paragraph in the beginning of the last.
hopefully, it will be more satisfying with that paragraph.
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eh i think the story ended on a bitter note, but eh.
If Celestia never saw him again, how did she see him at the Gala?
4086916 That's before the six month time skip
4086921 Never saw him again implies... like, never. As in TD died and withered into dust and Celestia still didn't see him.
4087021 fixing...
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She never ever ever ever EVER saw him again. And that's like, four evers.
its funny how everyone are clueless to the other thing, 'the other elements were surprise to see him' ergo he did't go with them ergo, either TD hasn't talk much with the elements or he just never go back to ponyville. After all wouldn't Twilight write her back about TD returning and ask where was he? its says she need mounts to got over him, so Luna probably cover for her keeping the secret. But still if even Pinkie was surprise then TD really cut communications with them to some degree
So, I see a new chapter, open it and read the same second time... Shame on you.
At least, please, say that will be sequel, because you really good in it and there is really more left to say.
P.S. That isn't necessary that sequel must be the same story. It can be all new, but take into consideration what happened before.
D:
I think were just empathizing with Celestia a little bit but that's the story it ends for her before it could really blossom. Leaving a void of desire for closure that can't be. Because it was never real... OR WAS IT. what a
I'm okay with this ending because it allows the reader to make their own conclusions. You can say they never get along and the events of the original story continue on or that maybe TD and Celestia did get along and maybe more. Whaterever you like, it's a blank canvas.
Well than.....
It's fine, you tried your hardest to make it better. I liked it. Don't let all these haters get to you. The fact that you went back and changed it means a lot.
I see... So they went on a few dates at least... Good story
Wanna know what I wanted to see in this story, that I knew wouldn't have been in it?
No?
Okay. I wanted kobolds, because they make everything better. Well kobolds and puns, but that is a given.
You son of a- luring me here with the promis of a new chapter only to take it away.