I trotted through the hallways towards my bed chambers with my eyes closed and a smile plastered on my face like the Element of Laughter, Pinkie Pie, remembering all the fun I had on my date with TD and giggling as I recalled the better moments. I had reverted back to my alicorn form after stepping inside the castle. I skipped into my room, closed the door shut, hopped onto my bed and giggled some more like a filly who was excited to open her presents for Hearths Warming Eve the next day. The guards were stationed outside on duty, and the servants were in their quarters asleep. Nopony on the planet could possibly tarnish my moment of sheer bliss except--
“TIA!!!”
I was tackled into a hug by Luna. If not for my immortality, she would have definitely squeezed the life out of my body. “We were so worried about our sister! Art thou alright? Did the human bring thee any harm? Why--?”
I interrupted Luna with a raised hoof. “Everything is alright, Luna. The date went normally without any problems.” Luna looked dumbfounded for a moment. I couldn’t blame her, honestly. Nopony could have seen that coming, so I gave her a minute to process this newly acquired information.
“Art thou positively sure nothing out of the ordinary happened?” she asked.
“No, Luna. I’m sure.”
“We are still having a hard time believing this entire ordeal passed without anything happening. It is TD we are talking about.”
“Perhaps the both of us were over-exaggerating. Our imaginations were getting the best of us.”
“Perhaps. Art thou absolutely sure the whole date went normally without thee being subjected to any physical or psychological torment?”
“Yes. Believe me, Luna, I’m surprised as you are.”
Luna thought about it for a moment. “Alright.” A relieved smile spread across her face. “As long as the issue has been resolved, We don’t have to worry about any more courting courtesy of TD.”
I cringed at that last sentence. “Well…”
Luna raised an eyebrow curiously. She wasn’t catching on. “Well what, dear sister?”
“I may or may not have enjoyed the date myself.”
“Come again?” She laughed before continuing, “Our ears aren’t what they used to be. We almost heard thou didst enjoying thyself.”
“Well, TD can be a very calm and gentle stallion once you get to know him; implying he actually is a stallion, and--”
I was the one to be interrupted this time when Luna slammed both her hooves on both sides of my face, puckering my lips as a result. “Tia, look at me.” She even dropped the Royal “We.” This was serious.
“Um… Very well?” I was having a hard time forming words with my face in this position.
“Art thou with me?”
“Yes? I don’t see where this is--”
“Shhhhhhh…”
“Luna, what are you--?“
“Shhshhshhshhhshhh.”
Luna activated her horn and placed it on mine. In an instant I saw the entire date fast forward through my vision: the chat we had in Doughnut Joe’s, me putting my hoof on TD’s hand in the opera, our stroll through the park, watching the moon set, everything played out in my head. It was embarrassing, considering the fact Luna was obviously using her mind reading spell on me. The only being that can break an alicorn’s mind safeguards that prevent any mental assault from befalling on them is another alicorn. When the spell wore off, and my vision cleared, Luna looked at me emotionlessly.
“Luna? Is everything alright?” I inquired. She kept staring at me, emotionless. I waved my hoof in front of her face in an attempt to snap her back into consciousness. She stayed silent for another moment. Finally, she spoke.
“Sister?” she asked in a concerned tone.
“Yes, Luna?” I replied.
“Hast thou fallen for TD Harrison Powell?”
“What makes you say--?”
“HAST THOU FALLEN FOR TD HARRISON POWELL?!” she repeated in her Royal Canterlot Voice. Thank Faust my room was sound proof. The last thing I wanted was for somepony to hear that.
I couldn’t say a word. I looked down at the floor. I felt like a filly being scolded by her mother. What made it more shameful was that my own little sister was scolding me.
“HE IS PLAYING YOU, CELESTIA!”
“Well you see...”
“ANSWER ME!”
“YES!” I paused for a moment. “I’ve fallen, fallen hard. I have no idea how it happened, but it did. The time I spent with him was the best I spent in years! I just kept telling myself I was having a nice time with TD, trying my best to convince myself TD’s presence was not the reason this date went so perfectly. I hate TD for making me feel this way. I hate him for making me fall for him so quickly!”
I breathed heavily after. Luna all the while kept silent and looked at me sympathetically. She sighed and put a hoof on my shoulder.
“Tia?” she spoke. I looked at her before speaking.
“Yes Luna?”
“We are not the one to stop thee from liking or dare We say loving, whoever thou chooses, but We want you to ask thyself if it is really safe for you to do so. It goes without saying he is one of the only beings in Equestria who can defy the both of us.”
“That’s just it, Luna. He isn’t like one of those nobles constantly trying to court me for my power or wealth. When I was with him, I could feel he liked me not for what I was, but who I was. He doesn’t want status or titles. He’s above that. He looked at me like I was an ordinary pony and not an alicorn princess.”
Luna stared at me for a moment. “Alright, Tia. We understand.”
“Really?”
“Really.”
I smiled and hugged Luna before my eyes went wide open as I realized something. I didn’t even ask TD for a second date! And he had to go back to Ponyville sooner or later. I had to make arrangements for that too!
“I almost forgot to ask TD on another date!” I stopped hugging my sister before getting off my bed, “I’ll be be back in fifteen minutes. So--”
Luna interrupted me with a hoof to the face. “No, Tia, thou needs to rest. The sun cannot be raised with a tired mind, and it is already late. Let Us deliver your invitation to TD.” I stared at Luna. I was about to say no to her, but she did not look like she was going to take no for an answer.
“Alright. Tell him we’ll meet at Doughnut Joe’s at five.”
“Understood.” Luna activated her horn. “Sweet dreams sister.” And just like that she teleported out of sight. Something told me that I should not have let her done that. Regardless, I laid down on my bed and closed my eyes, excited for tomorrow.
BONUS
TD was brushing his teeth in his hotel room’s bathroom, getting ready to go to bed himself.
Suddenly, he felt himself being engulfed in an all too familiar aura and slammed against a wall. Before he could question what could happen, Luna appeared in front of him.
“Listen up thou ungrateful whelp. My sister has taken a liking to thee. We don’t know what dark pacts thou hast made to achieve this, but mark Our words. If we get intelligence that thou art plotting against our sister, We will bend thy spine into a pretzel and yes...” She levitated TD closer to her. “We will keep a closer eye on thee. Clear?”
TD scoffed and rolled his eyes. “I figured that was a given, yeah?”
“Good” Luna said before dropping on the ground. Suddenly her expression turned joyful and she smiled. “Meet her at five o’clock at Doughnut Joe’s”
Her horn fired up before her expression changed to grim again.
“Or else.”
And just like that, she teleported out of sight.
Here's a "wacky" sidekick.
The Troll god.
He is capable of absolutely any magics which are mildly annoying.
(This means he is therefore capable of every single magic in existence)
BUT he can only use the magics to troll people. He also dosen't give a shit about the main hero, and is just in the quest for the lolz.
He also holds a grudge against the hero for not letting him be the main character.
P.S.- Make him steal the velociraptor's bananas. That always works!
And will you credit the maker of the character?
I would post a creature, but in my current (tired) state, it would be either too stupid or too vulgar to be a consideration.
are
PINKIE!!
jiro
like k9 from doctor who,
but half insane,
meaning glitches.
I am awake at 1 in the morning on christmas.... For your story....
That's how much I'm looking forward to this....
Shouldn´t Tia be a little upset about her sister´s mind invasion?
I'm sorry. The amount of herp and derp in these three chapters are... horrifying.
Oh how I loved that ending Luna being all protecting and mad and he just like 'yeah whatever, I'm here for your sister and you can't stop us bitch deal with it' Like a mother fucker boss right there.
TD Powers, the mares master.
As for side kick? does it need to have a physical form? because I think I have an idea of what could be.
A human spirit, a spirit that only can be seeing or hear by others humans. This spirit does not even have a name, TD only know by the self tittle he input on himself 'The son of chaos' and as his name imply he can make all kind of magic but a much lower scale than discord and can only use it throw TD like a catalyzer so he can only use magic 60 feets around him. He is a wacky but nice guy, that usually only use his powers to teach lesson of friendship, usually in bullies on school and that its how he meet TD.
So if Luna try something well, her magic may ricochet right back at her with 'The son of chaos' watching his back
I have no idea why I find this so enjoyable.
I blame Cadance, her brainwashing spell can make anything happen
3679760 Nope. I'll give youpoints for effort though.
3679833 fixing
soooooo he isnt under any type of influence?
3681323 No Spoilers.
3681323
Yes and that influence its call Love, the poor guy its drunk of it, that he is seeing everything blurry and is not noticing that he is hitting on a horse. that or booze, what ever it is he is over the influence or something.
Luna is off her meds,Her Bi-Polar is showing
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Dude, you don't have sisters, do you?
They are ALWAYS invading you privacy. Your mind is just another thing your parents make you hand over...
To be honest, I wished you'd make TD more resistant to having a close relationship with Celestia. Sure he wants to bury the hatchet, but the TD I know would never go into a relationship with Celestia. Forgiveness, I feel, is more natural and you're pushing it with just friends. I'm not saying don't let this be a romance, but I believe it would be a little one sided at first.
Makes me believe something IS going on. Oh well, great story. Liked, faved, and watched.
3685833 No spoilers.
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Alicorn Prince, defiantly alicorn prince, it will be much better if he become the first male alicorn in history, je I could imagine the reaction of the press
Oh would you maybe made one last chapter before the years end? please, if you can that is.
Also another possible theory love potion, he put some of it on tea when she didn't notice and that its why the love happen so quickly the reason into why, are a mystery, maybe he has a dark plan to bring Discord back, maybe he made a bet or Discord treat him into doing so, maybe he got bored and said 'ok I wake up, I made breakfast I teach children at the school? ah what the heck I'm going to ask Celestia on a date, the look on her face will be priceless'
Then when she said yes '……ok, didn't see that coming'
3704903 Sorry. I just got my new laptop and it doesn't have a god damn microsoft office. No office means no work meaning I'm on Hiatus.
3705218
Damn well happy new year and congratulation on your new laptop
My guess is TD stumbled onto some kind of Reversal Jewel (from Ranma 1/2)
"On Hiatus"
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But... there's thepiratebay...?
Can't you just... I don't know... pirate it?
3714890 i'm sorry but that mustache and the pirating comment was just to much for me.
3705218
Can't you use google drive to store your text document?
3734642 i would if only i new what google drive was cuz i have little to no technical knowledge
3735376
You have a skype? I could help if you want.
*edit*
If you don't have a skype, do you think you would be willing to download it? You could get a lot of help from people if you trusted it.
3736131 I'm gonna b honest. I appreciate the help. Really, I do! But I'm still not comfertable with skyping strangers. Have no fear though, My brother has the microsoft office disk with him. The only thing I have to do is convince his lazy ass to download it.
3736184
So you do have it, you just don't trust the random guy. Aight, i'm not sure if it's even possible for me to do any harm through skype, I'm just suggesting a free and easier way of storing your files from any computer you find....
God I sound like a sales pitch....
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Either way, sorry for double reply, but I highly suggest using google drive, and learning how to use it. Promise you won't regret it. Have a good night or day.
Break linas back infantry!!!!!!
Um... Erm, Luna? You know subtlety is a thing, right?
Update? Dont tell me you forgot..
3831546 exam weeks a bitch
3831627 I know man, just keep going
Okay, I was having fun right up till the end their when Luna lost her shit.
What the hell?
She had better recieve some kind of fallout for this.
This is quite enjoyable!
This is good stuff.
The Bonus... well- sucked.
As for the chapter? Not bad.
3908639 What didn't you like about the bonus?
Well TD is in for a ride.
4230283 I like the bonus overprotective Luna is best Luna
5118334 I don't know. For me, it just means that the sibling/ parent/ guardian/ friend/ family member things that the one they care about isn't mature enough to not only choose what makes them happy, but handle the possible sorrow and/ heartbreak when one of them decides that the relationship isn't working out. ... It just irritates me. I get that they care and don't want bad stuff to happen to them, but on the flip-side, I think that it stunts their emotional development and progression towards maturity. Because in order to understand happiness, we must experience sorrow, because without having experienced sorrow, then we cannot perceive happiness as happiness, nor understand it to be happiness and therefore our lives are the less richer/ dynamic by the lack thereof. This can be applied to any positive emotion, that to know that positive emotion for what it is, we must experience the contrasting negative emotion in order to understand and appreciate the positive emotion.
Personally, I'd have liked Luna to basically say to 'Tia; 'We're worried that he may have ulterior motives for this date, but you're a big mare, sister, and well able to decide if this is the path desirable for you. Know that regardless the outcome, we love you, sister and will support you, whether this path is to your joy or sorrow.' And leaving TD alone, or if she did approach him, to just simply say something to the effect that, 'we love our sister and don't wish to see her sorrow. Please give her the love she deserves, and don't break her heart, if your feelings for her are true. Because it would cause us great sorrow, if our sister returns to us in tears.' Because I'm not okay with implied violence and threats made to the 'outsider' seeking to establish a courtship with the one he/ she desires to establish the courtship with.