I'm Shadow Flicker, and I'm new in town. I'm also the newest member of the cutie mark crusaders.
My paren-err, my old friends, told me I'd be getting my cutie mark any day now, but what do they know? It feels like it's been ages, and I'm tired of waiting around for it to happen. That's when I met Applebloom and her friends.
So I joined her club. I never would have guessed the events that would follow. Like getting my cutie mark.
I'm not a bad pony...
am I?
Feedback please!
[My first fic, so feel free to correct me and such. I'm not very good at descriptions either, if anyone would like to suggest something better feel free. I'm also not sure what I want this story to be, so I rated it slice of life. Rated teen for possible things that may happen, but nothing serious. There will be no gore or sex, except maybe some humor/poking fun at it, I haven't quite decided. Man this got long really fast.]
This is quite intriguing. I find it a bit odd how Shadow Flicker could reduce Diamond Tiara to the verge of tears just by pointing out her name and laughing at it, that part seems a bit short. However, this is a cool start to a story. I'm looking forward to more.
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Thanks for the feedback! When the story is done and finished (Or when I get bored) I'll probably go back and edit that.
So...
he's a kleptomaniac?
That's quite amusing. I didn't really know what I expected, but it wasn't that. The appearance of this cloaked stallion is intriguing and there's a lot of room to expand on Shadow Flicker's character. Keep it up!
Sorry for the delay everyone, chapter 4 should be coming out by this Sunday if not earlier.
Chapter 4 is out! Sorry again for the delay, hope everypony enjoys it. Looking forward to getting any sort of feedback.
I like it!
Now reading next chapter.
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Glad you like it. Just in time to see Chapter 4 get added too :D
Let me know what you think, still looking for feedback or just fun commentary to what you think is going to happen (Or what you want to happen, could change things around
Thanks for reading guys!
Ok, this is the first time I get to say this, FIRST!!! HA! Finally!!! Not including the author! Great chapter by the way.
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Haha not quite first, you're just commenting on the chapter 4 page, of which noone has commented. Everypony tends to use the main page.
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Okay, you know what...just ... SCREW MY LIFE!!!
I like to make myself laugh. HA HA.
-Clay the Draconequus
Wow, high point of 87 views yesterday and only two today. Weird how things change :P
Can't wait for the next part!