This story takes place inside twilights house. Her friends are all over for a sleep over and, they all gather around to tell stories from before they met. This...is Twilights story.
I like ponies nuff said
This story takes place inside twilights house. Her friends are all over for a sleep over and, they all gather around to tell stories from before they met. This...is Twilights story.
Ow,ow,owowow. You need a pre reader/editor.
It's an interesting idea but those sentences need spacing.
spell check is needed somewhat as well. Capitalization and some spelling issues.
I'll keep an eye on it nonetheless.
Thanks for your honest opinion. If I make another story I will keep those in mind.