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Here is a tale of sadness and woe
Featuring the Cutie Mark Crusader trio
Whereupon the three find their special talents
But due to a horrifying happenstance

They find those revelations come at a price
And the end result isn’t always nice
This story is about some of their happiest days
And yet their worst in so many, many ways


Edited by Abcron

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

This was one of the greatest things I've read in weeks. This here made it so much more touching. It was literally the first time ever I read something out loud to myself.

Awesome work! Hope to see more soon. :pinkiehappy:

Just one wish, since this is poetry, it'd be great if you could center the entire story. Looks a little clunky with everything being left-aligned.

Oh, and tell Abcron he missed a few things, namely punctuation. :V

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I've heard you are a very legit writer, so coming from you, that actually means a lot to me. :pinkiesmile:
Thank you very much. I hope I don't disappoint.

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:rainbowhuh:

This is genius. I bow to your poetry skill.

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Hehe, thank you. :derpytongue2:

:raritydespair: That's all I have to say.

If I could cry, I'd have a pool full of tears.

Did you cry though? XD
Thanks, man. :derpytongue2:

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