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So... about what age is Sweetie in this story?
This seems like a good start, interested in seeing where this goes from here.
3578751 It says she is eleven years old
Hay! Sweetie Belle is as old as me! It's a SIGN!
3583910 ...I don't think eleven-year-old's should be reading fic's labeled as mature
3584138 Well, my little bro got into my account. AGAIN.
How did I let this happen!? 
Well, sorry for the comment. Darn, it's a good thing this story didn't have an actuall SEX SCENE yet!
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Your account was created four days ago, do you really expect me to believe he got onto it more than once in that span of time?
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Usually at that point people still have a piece of paper with their information on it, or their brother stole it when they first created an account, so it is possible. And mature is just a suggestion...until it gets to the blood, gore, sex, murder, rape, and death! So where's the harm in- wait a murderous sex-crazed eleven-year-old could become the countries next secret weapon! ...No, seriously though, this is MATURE. Don't read this is you are still a filly or a colt.
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I'm an 11 year old and I read mature fics sometimes, but if it starts getting really sexual I usually just skip it.
I don't mind grimdark at all though, I've read Sweet Apple Massacre 
3899340 Guys, please, IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 DO NOT READ FICTION LABELED MATURE. You're 11 years old for goodness sake, you should be doing the things you don't get to do when you're an adult, not reading smut/gore fiction on the internet. On top of that it makes me feel super uncomfortable about writing this stuff because I now know FOR A FACT that children are seeing it, and that isn't right. Trying to act like an adult by doing this kind of stuff just proves that you aren't ready to be surrounding yourself with this kind of media. Instead, you should go read something a little more age appropriate, like The Hobbit, or Coraline, or Alice in Wonderland. I'm sure you'd like those stories a lot better anyway.
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your right.... But kids these days are allowed to play GTA5 when theyre around 9. Blame ze parents.
I like this, and there are only a few mistakes. The only one which I will point out is that "ruby" pluralises to "rubies", not "ruby's".
P.S. Is Fluttershy actually meant to be seven feet tall‽ That's a good foot and a half over what is normal for a woman, it was making picturing the scene with her really weird.
3900557 I fixed the spelling mistakes, thanks for pointing that out. Also, yes her height is most definitely intentional.
3900573 Scary
Liked both this and the Twilight story a lot, I'll keep my eyes open for any more.
3900629 What's wrong with a woman being super tall?
3900632 I think anyone thats super tall is scary
Curious to see where this goes, let's just hope Rarity doesn't walk in on Twi and AJ in the middle of something.
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I'm really tierd of being treated differently because I'm 11
3900785 I'm sorry, and I don't like being this big, grumpy adult, but this is just something you are going to have to accept. As a person who posts explicit content, it's my responsibility to try and prevent minors from viewing it. And as a minor, it's your responsibility to respect my wishes by not reading it. Part of growing up is accepting responsibility, and it's not fun but we all have to do it. Trust me, you'll be better off for having waited.