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303891 So...?
This is how Cupcakes should have been.
This is a very good story.
I just have to say something about this that's been bothering me since I read the last entry...
Okay, so seeing as Evil Pinkie (I decided to call her that and real Pinkie just 'Pinkie') wrote that last entry about the electrocution, that means that the journal was present in the room. However (if I remember correctly), earlier in the story it's stated that Luna finds this journal in a lockbox in her room closet.
How did it there?
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You've got some imagination. I was a bit thrown off by the AppleDash shipping, but this re-sparked my interest.
I threw up in my mouth a little.
561593 Maybe during when Rainbow Dash was passed out from it she ran upstairs and hid it or Can break the fourth wall just as easy as the original
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This section was amazing to read. The author did a great job in getting you immersed in the mental conflict in Pinkies mind. I was amazed that I actually felt sorry for Pinkie Pie, as most renditions for "Cupcakes" Pinkie are just two dimensional monsters.
This has been the best of the story thus far. The writing style has been best here. Elsewhere, it doesn't flow as well
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yay let's make some cupcakes
Good job so far just the character's personalities are off...
The Journal of the Cupcake Killer is the best section of the story. The way it transitioned from Pinkie having the crazy voice in her head, to the crazy Pinkie having an annoying normal voice in her head was great.
The journal definetly had to be the best arc. Have a fitting song:
Dashie's hot blooded, check it and see.
She's got a fever of 103.
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Pinkie deliberately ran at AJ it's like suicide by cop. I mean the last entry she wanted to die because it was the only way to stop pinkamena. It took me reading this over and over again to see she made AJ kill her to save her friends. If anything pinkie became a tragic hero.
1:00 AM: Well, just finished Confessions of Love.I think it's about time I got to bed, I have to get up early today...
...Eh, I'll check out the next chapter, it's short, so I should still be fine. Worst case scenario, I spend another half-hour and sleep 'til 8, giving me 6:30 sleep, should be just enough.
4:00 AM: ...Fuck...
This whole "Journal of the cupcake killer" part of the story has a real Shining feel to it, I love it!
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This song is perfect for the whole diary bit.
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This seems like it took quite a lot of work.
Well written and fun to read, well done.
I find this story deserves more views.
Her birthday was two days away from mine? Sweet! And she started the journal on my birthday too.
The past four chapters... They were some of the most disturbing words I have ever read.
You, good Sir, have captured a view inside the insanity superbly. Simply outstanding work.
The journal sounded like something from The Shining.
You can really get into the head of a pyschopath.
i have to give props when its desterved. i like how this is impammented in the stoy. there is the goryest thing i've ever read, but is esential to understanding the story. not for the gore, but the delve into pinkies split personality, yet have it be one big pill ( as in only these 4 chapters) of heavy gore ( meaning it dose't get that graffic again) letting the audience throw out all " happy pretences".
698916 i did the same my first read but i can say it was worth it. but i did make the mistake of listening to a youtube reading, hero... 123 i think and these chapters he desides to use HEAVY sound effects. save to say i was rainbow at the end of this scene without the passing-out part. so stick to reading ( at least these 4 chapters) this yourself.
but still the rest of the story is still WELL WORTH IT.
607791 Even better leave a icon if this should be the offical spinoff of cupcakes, but
2678913 No this is better
452940 Yes and i think i'll use this type of thing for when my OC in my profile pic searches for RD (mom)
5096081 I'm sorry Applejack, although I am a plus 1000+ year old ruler of a country, having to deal with politics on a daily basis, I have no idea how my subjects would react to diary describing a butchering of ponies in every of it's gory detail.
I'M SWO SWORRRY :(
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Sorry but this seems very unrealistic to me.
Damn this is to real. .
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I do have to apologize to Milesprower06. I thought I was not able you read all his Cupcake Killer series. I am glad that I can read all his work in order in the timeline.
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Don't you know it's to mimic Applejack's accent ?
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She spent one thousand years on the moon, she didn't do much ruling during that time.
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Thank you for the link.
Am I being dumb or did the diary only state 12 including Dash.
Noi, Cotton Cloudy, Carrot Top, Sparkler, Blues, Tropical Storms, Colgate, Cloudkicker, Vanilla Skies, Seaswirl(foam), Bon Bon, Dash. Anybody I missed?