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Ooooh. I love a cliffhanger!!
DAMN YOUR CLIFFHANGER!
503470 You must have been loving the last 4 chapters then, lol.
503482 I love that your comment and the one above it are right next to each other. Almost calls for a screen cap!
Wow O.O, I really cant wait to see how the rest of this story goes. I was crying toward the end of the chapter and it was extremely good! Thank you for this chapter!
whens the next chapter and does Rainbow finnaly talk to her parents?
503547 You'll have to wait and see.
Chapter 10 is currently in-progress.
503549 yay :D
To me, it all felt just a tad rushed, the dialogue feeling almost static. Even so, I still can't wait for the next chapter.
Also, no parents as you're about to die? Cold, Rainbow Dash. Very cold.
Random predictions:
A: Rainbow dies. Total downer ending.
B: Rainbow lives, and somehow has wings again. Get together with family, happy ending.
C: Rainbow lives, and while she still remains wingless, she gains the ability to randomly teleport, Pinkie style. Best ending.
The grammar nazi in me would like to point out that in the sentence:
"Before she could even react, there was a dull 'thunk!', as the thrown knife found it's mark,"
it should be "the knife found its mark." It's = It is, whereas Its indicates the possessive.
503585 From my first draft of the ending, I anticipated some readers not being satisfied with what I have planned.
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...No. That's definitely not a good answer. But, at the same time, I can't see that really happening. Not right after the set-up with the necklace.
Not until I reread it and saw the line where Rainbow is mentioned as already being lifeless. Crap.
Prediction B2: The wings are pink.
awwwwwwwwwwww snap.
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Fuuuuu... I just can't wait for next chapter. I hate cliffhangers...
Prediction: Rainbow lives.
Just a guess
I doubt she'll have her wings back.
Only one way to be sure though...waiting...
Update frenzy!
DAMN! What!? …Awesome chapter! And the flashbacks just made it so much more tense.
I will also predict that somehow Rainbow has wings again. Because her being dead doesn't really..flow right. That and I doubt Pinke would have given the Elemet necklace if she was going to die 5 minutes later.
Great chapter. I am calling a pink stripe being added to her mane, if there is any physical changes.
503596 As I've said before so long as AJ and RD aren't dead I'll be happy.
Best Chapter Ever!!
Cliffhangers...........HNNNNNNGGG.......
Cliffhanger? why i must know what happens next
This has been a very interesting story so far, I look forward for more my friend.
503585 you forgot D: rainbow dash turns into Surprise.
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Whaa? But... but... RAINBOW!
good chapter. Any plans on continuing after this arc or is it done for good.
508689 As of now, it's done. I'm not sure where else I could take it without it getting stale or redundant.
Of course, this may change. No promises.
511375 As in it will be done after Ch 10 and the epilogue. Don't want any misunderstandings.
503596 Ypu should do alt. endings
511394 I only did that for Tale of Two Bronies. The Cupcake Chronicles will have one, definitive ending.
HORRRRY SHIEATTT
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you sir, are a good writer
I go away for the weekend and miss this coming out. Another good chapter and yet another cliffhanger
So most seem to think Rainbow will get her wings back.
But the question is will they be blue like her originals
Or Pink like Pinkie
Or maybe even Dash will be all white with yellow hair like Surprise, Pinkie's earlier incarnation.
However what I' d like to see is multicolored wings, made up of the different colors of each of Pinkamena's victims.
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If you ever wanted to do an Omake or extra joke chapter, you could have Spike's flame sent the diary to Princess Celestia, just like Twi's friendship reports. You could have it drag Pinkamena along with it because she can't get too far away from it. Then you could have Celestia and Luna chasing the ghost all over Canterlot. You could even have it that only they can see Pinkamena, so the rest of Canterlot thinks the Princesses are losing it.
I feel the up most sympathy for Pinkie Pie.
Um yea I'm sure she fine
NO RAINBOW CANT DIEEE!
Removing the knife was a very bad idea. It was the only thing keeping her from bleeding out.
But I guess everything is going to be alright with the Pinkie ex Machina.
5133055 "Pinkie ex Machina", i'll be amazed if that doesn't become a thing.
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I'm actually a little sad that this isn't an actual thing for other fics.
The souls cursed by Pinkmena's influence are freed and are fixing this.
Burning always gets rid of ghosts...Sam and Dean taught me that.
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either that, salt and holy water, or a demonic ritual works too!
they should of called them up when signs started showing!