This tale chronicles the thoughts of a single brony trying to face reality as he attempts to write his own story, only to realize the story he's writing is about himself.
Warning: Not for the faint of heart.
Note: An extended series featuring Tyro and his new life splits off after Chapter 4. Check out Tyro's Tail for the continued story of Tyro in Equestria.
Not bad
I agree. I am curious as to what exactly it is you're going to do with story.
Hmm... interesting idea, but it's really hard to believe since it all happens so fast and I mean, if I were Twilight, I probably would be freaking the heck out about some human thing I've never seen before. Like, "You are not scientifically possible!"
hmm, interesting.
I shall track this
316682 You've got a good point there, I admit. I should put that in somewhere. I mean sure, this is a sad story, but I really need to work on Twilight's character. She's a little too serious for my liking, especially in the chapter I'm working on.
316580 Wouldn't you just like to know
I love a good cliffhanger!
Story concludes in next chapter.
EDIT: Maybe two more chapters. I haven't really decided yet.
EDIT: Definitely two more chapters.
Hangin them cliffs!
Its great so far!
Dun dun duuuuun!
318004 Thanks, that was perfect.
It's all done. I split the last chapter into two parts. For the happy ending, skip Chapter 5.
holy shit.
That's depressing
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Sorry.
I did warn you, but I get what you mean. I like the happier ending more too.
I hope they let him stay, and don't you know, do to him what Romans did to christians.
I like how you bait us into believing something amazing and happy happened, and then tear it away D: xD I think you should countinue the story from the last chapter, the happy one.
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Thanks, I do my best.
As for continuing the story, I've been thinking about it. I would have to come up with some direction for it to take first.
As for the Roman-Christian thing, I think Fluttershy might have a thing or two to say about that. Twilight too, for that matter, after everything he did for her.
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xD I would think so, but then pinky might be a problem. How could she resist baking a human flavored cupcake?
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She really doesn't need to. As Tyro noticed, he doesn't exactly seem to be human anymore. This may be (read: is) related to why he hurt so much.
so, it has a continuation then?
1902817 It has an alternate ending, of a sort, in the form of the continuation of Tyro's story. It occurred to me that the premise I used wasn't half bad, so I picked it up and ran with it a bit. It isn't done yet though. The name is The Collected Adventures of Tyro. Feel free to read it if you want to.