In the beginning...
This is a story of how Pinkie Pie shaped and guided the world in order to form Equestria.
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This is more legit than the bible. Have a moustache
Here's my review in a nutshell
It's good.
Nuff sad
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This was ok, helped get rid of a few minutes, and those things are everywhere, so I'll take whatever help I can get in getting rid of those disgusting things.
Brilliant! This is going into the favourites!
I loved that last line, although I was hoping for Pinkie to be telling the story. "and that's how Equestria was made"
Ciao darling
998913 Thanks.
999723 I thought about it. I really did.
1000478 No problem, it made me happier than quite a few fanfics I have read lately
Our Pinkie who resides in heaven; blessed be her name...
*Snnif* (sobbing) T-That... Was... Won-wonndeful!
OH........MY..........SWEET........CELESTIA
Hmm.
It has some good points as a myth. However, there are some theological and character consistency points I take issue with.
For one, I can't see Pinkie Pie as a goddess being this remote. Her big flaw, and big strength, is that she doesn't really leave things alone; she has to get involved with people even when that just ends up making matters worse. It's also rather out of character that she'd just genocide humanity and kill us all for not getting along. Wouldn't she at least try to through a planet-wide party first?
I like "Pinkie gets distracted" as the explanation for divine fallibility. There is a clear character arc, and the succession of "why X is so" events have a mythically authentic feel. I must also give you points off for just having Discord "appear". He's the most powerful entity in the entire show, and he was clearly able to trump omnipotent demiurge Pinkie Pie. We need some explanation of what he is and where he came from, and how we was able to topple this deity.
On the whole an interesting piece, but it could use improvement.
1300233 You make some good points. I'll have to go back and address those.
EDIT: I went back and changed a couple things. Thanks for the feedback!
I feel this is a great way to understand the bible. I like it from first to last.
praise be to pinkie
Amen.
Wow that was amazing.
This makes way too much sense.
Pinkie is a godnes
praise to pinkie creator of the whole