Gosh. I never knew that I had a big brother. Rainbow Flash had just found out too. He moved in with me and now... I just don't know what to do. What can go wrong with siblings just hanging out?
Gaah! A sister?! Dad told me this week so I gotta find her. Rainbow Dash? Simple. The best runner in the world. But living at her house? That's another problem. What can go wrong with us hanging?
*NOTE* I'm going to make a lot of side edits. Like... A LOT. Suck as the whole point of it... Sorry.
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Well, interesting, a big brothers love to her lil' sis, interesting idea.
Just to start off, you have alot of problems like grammar problems, word structures etc.
Don't give up, dude. You've got the fire to make a good story, try to find a buddy who's good in english to help you out, alright, :D
I'm lookin forward to more chapters of this story.
This story is worth a thumbs up and a favourite. :3
Floop :3
Sincerely,
Lime GreenSharde'
3441626 Heh. Yeah. I'm not doing so great in english class and I did just join the click here link. It'll take you there. So yeah. I plan to get help there.
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Well,I do hope you'll get better and better cuz' I see potential you, I started out just like you, everything messed up. With a litle help, I reached to ze next level :3
Lookin' forward for moar, and good luck with your trainin'
Floop :3
Sincerely,
Lime GreenSharde'
3452503
Well,I do hope you'll get better and better cuz' I see potential you, I started out just like you, everything messed up. With a litle help, I reached to ze next level :3
Lookin' forward for moar, and good luck with your trainin'
Floop :3
Sincerely,
Lime GreenSharde'
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