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ShadowPheonix2115


Just a guy who likes writing Fanfics

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A mysterious visitor from an alternate universe has landed in Ponyville. He seems relatively normal, but he has technology, and weapons that show a violent past. Who is this man, and what are his plans during his stay in Ponyville

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 5 )

Human? check.
Violent past? check.
Too short? check.
poopy self insert emo time? you tell me.:trollestia:

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Human? Sort of

Violent? Definitely but with good reason

Too Short? I'm trying my best to moderate so as to not lose readers before they finish a chapter.

poopy self insert emo type? Ok neither me nor Alex are emo's, and he's definitely not based off me?

very good story so far. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

i can't wait to read more chapters of this story. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

They have no right to keep his weapons from him. Celestia should return them at once. I would refuse to eat or cooperate until that condition was met.

Sorry, didn't mean to be discouraging or a pest, that's just my opinion.

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