What impact would bronies eventually have on the world? Greater than one might think. Love and Tolerance is spread, forward thinking is highly encouraged, and moreover, the limits of the world were put to the test as imagination soared. Project DISCORD. Designed to create humans with impossible powers in hopes of bettering the human race. Due to a high impact left by bronies that started this new era of ideas, the goal was to implement these into accurate representations of the mane six.
Though Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Fluttershy showed how things could influence people in the small ways, Two others were made with the true goal of DISCORD in mind. Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie Pie were given abilities with nigh unthinkable power. They were the secret project. But one was held more secret. Discord was the complete extent of the power. Controlled, or was he? Now Twilight, Pinkie Pie and I, a scientist for DISCORD, must search out the others and find a way to stop Discord from ruling. Starting before anybody imagined the future.
Hopefully going to stick with this one.
Also I'm going to say Luke is not based on me. Though I guess you could say I took a few traits from some friends. it's kinda hard not to.
Now time for the chapter comments:
Utopia and Dystopia are only a few small decisions away apparently. Also I should note something that I didnt feel I needed to adress in the story. The DISCORD project was mostly being run in a large facility in the US with scientists from everywhere around coming there. But small research was done here and there. the DISCORD facility was where it all came together.
Cracker Barrel chicken and dumplings are pretty dang awesome though.
Chapter comments:
It's kinda obvious those thoughts would run through your mind dude. I didn't add in the whole lack of shame part for tension really, but I thought it would be a very likely thing to overlook when feeding personality and world ideas into people.
Also, hello, Alexi/Rainbow Dash. Kinda rude of you though. What's so important?
Why do I read the description and think, maximum ride?
Just going to point out here that downvoting this story without telling me WHAT is wrong doesn't help me
Overdue chapter comments:
I debated two roads. Making Alexi want to go along with everything and overall ready to kick Discord out, or go with a more cold personality due to what she sees as DISCORD ruining her friend's hopes for life, which would aim more toward her loyalty to her friends. (Though she knows about the others, the only one she cares about by now is AJ) It's obvious she isn't totally different from Dash's personality, but it's skewed. I decided to steer her away from the group.
Applejack wasn't really introduced in this chapter. She is there; she isn't as bitter as Alexi, but nothing else was shown. I don't think it takes a genius to figure out that note has something to do with her.
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Aha, I just got that.
... Wow the similarities are uncanny.
I don't know.
This is the story i have gotten a poorest reception from, and--lets be honest--it deserves the reception it had. Yet, I still want to write it. I don't care if people don't really care for it, I want to write it. I mean, I can write a quick romance with twice the quality and get the favs and likes, but I don't want to.
AH well.