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Dude, your grammer needs HEAVY revision.
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Yeah, saw all that afterwards. Gave it a thumbs up to counter the negativity.
put the notice containing the info on the translator in the top in bold so pplp c it better. just a suggestion.
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If the author is too lazy to find someone to help them correct the grammar for an English audience, he's going to get downvoted.
Plus, it wasn't good even if the grammar had been correct.
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Hi, thanks .
Another error by me,I should write," I don't know someone who can correct my grammar".
This is my first fic english-written, and may be missing some details, The original fic was deleted by mistake, so im writing again.
Thanks for Reading.
Hablas español? jeje
I honestly found it pretty interesting because it's a basic set of dialogue and actions without mentioning of proper setting. It's basically a screen play waiting to become a good movie and I would love to help see it happen. Besides, if you just fit all of the missing components in yourself, you could see that this is a rather interesting read. If you don't agree with me, then that's your opinion.
My English is fatal, soon shall begin to take lessons. thanks for reading.
Contact me if you are interested in vecion Spanish.
OK the last chapter was way cleaner feeling at least i suggest asking the community out here to see if theirs a someone who wouldn't mind cleaning it up cause i like the idea of the story (cause im a horrible horrible person going to pony hell
) but as it is its pretty much unreadable; also, use their names don't do the parentheses thing it just makes things that much worse
o im going to be brutal here the first chapter made more scence than the second chapter, you should just stick with the first chapters layout, cause having it ike that for the 2nd is way too confusing.
3 words what the f**k is this I just cant read it please reformat
958887 ok I was way to harsh I understand putting initials instead of name when you are writing it but you need to put the names in before you release it please reformat it & republish it is a good story with a good concept