Dude, your grammer needs HEAVY revision.

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Yeah, saw all that afterwards. Gave it a thumbs up to counter the negativity.

put the notice containing the info on the translator in the top in bold so pplp c it better. just a suggestion.

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If the author is too lazy to find someone to help them correct the grammar for an English audience, he's going to get downvoted.

Plus, it wasn't good even if the grammar had been correct.

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Hi, thanks .
Another error by me,I should write," I don't know someone who can correct my grammar".
This is my first fic english-written, and may be missing some details, The original fic was deleted by mistake, so im writing again.

Thanks for Reading.

Hablas español? jeje

I honestly found it pretty interesting because it's a basic set of dialogue and actions without mentioning of proper setting. It's basically a screen play waiting to become a good movie and I would love to help see it happen. Besides, if you just fit all of the missing components in yourself, you could see that this is a rather interesting read. If you don't agree with me, then that's your opinion.