• Member Since 17th Aug, 2013
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Delta04


A friend of mine said I was delusional. I almost fell off my unicorn.

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Don't you hate people who are just too incompetent to help by saying what they don't like? I do. So let me lend you a hand.

He gave you a funny look. You hated that look. He always gave you that look whenever you had this conversation. He always told me how I should be like other people and just be... Normal. You sighed once more, pinching the bridge of your nose before waving your arm around in exasperation.

Note the underline. This is in thought, right? if it is that you might want to put it in italic or something to make it clear.

Of coarse,

Course, not coarse.

Just because its the 213’344’455’434’333’455’541st century,

Wat funnymama.com/store/130727/199308_v0_600x.gif It really isn't necessary to have ridiculous dates like that. Is it? Also, it should be commas, not apostrophes.

And overall you should probably explain: Why this person is here, what is he doing, and generally just WTF. I've read Chapters one and part of two and that's all. I think it will be important to explain the whats whys and hows. Don't expect me to follow this story. It's not my interest.

it may sound complicated the details to some but i understand and i like it.

Yes. This isn't a ripoff at all.

Epic story, cant wait to see what happens.

Shoulda taken a picture with the nanites for later, musta been helluva dorable.

thats the best goddamn theory of pinkie i ever heard.
She is walking magic, she has magic that can see in the future, teleportation magic, and others.
SHE A WALKING CONDUIT OF MAGIC AND I LOVE IT.

I'm confused. Why does this have so many dislikes? Sure, it's not the best but it damn well deserves better than that! I, for one, quite enjoy this story. Green thumb for the under-appreciated!

...Seriously, please don't stop this. One day, you shall receive recognition.

3816494 Guess some people don't like the techno babble or how he's OP?
I still like it :twilightsheepish:

Are these ponies the ones that enforce the weird laws like rhyming zebras and whatever the other ones were?
Not making too much sense so far but I'm still enjoying it :pinkiehappy:

I wonder why those ponies were trying to kill him?

4060630 No spoilers for you, good sir/madam.

4060937 Darn, oh well a man can hope can't he

We fired a rainbow at Nightmare Moon and a Princess came out!”
And that's how baby's are made

4060937
It's not a spoiler if it never updated

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