Pinkamena has only wanted to be alone, to make everyone else as unhappy as herself, and to eat her own baked cupcakes.
Pinkie has only wanted to throw parties, make everypony happy, and to be there for her friends.
But when they start to become eachother, only one can imagine how dangerous things become...
you got to get more of the small details into this story
This story is awesome! Can't wait to read the next one!
3018945 Er.... What do you mean??
My only words:
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I think he means what you have is mostly back-and-forth dialogue; a little description would help bring the story to life.
Epic story! KELLEH! Write moar!
3023927 Thank you! Don't worry I'll write more!
Where's the second one titled No Cupcakes? I got a e-mail saying that this story has updated ,but the second story isn't here.
3055421 im so sorry! i unpublished it momentarily. i will write more soon!!!
amazing i'm fallowing
3060830 You are so sweet ;-; can i marry you?
What's the password to view the next part of the story? Me no want to wait!
The last sentence has to begin with a capital I.
More! Pleeeeeeeeeese.