The war between the two sisters have been going on for months, Pony's fighting each other, the Solar Empire was being attacked by the Lunar Republic and Celestia had to do something before her kingdom is destroyed. Princess Twilight and Princess Celestia have been hiding in a secret place for days. The rest of the ponies where in underground tunnels to shield them from the war above. Nightmare Moon has sent a letter to the two princess stating that Celestia must meet Nightmare Moon at the abandoned Colosseum on the other side of the canterlot mountains, Celestia agrees but does not tell Twilight about the upcoming events.
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A NLR fic that doesn't cast Celestia as the evil ruthless tyrant?
2950666>>2950666 Well kinda, her role was supposed to be a powerful princess that has a lot of responsibilities.
This line was doubled weirdly. I assume it was unintentional?
I am a little confused as to when this takes place. I assume the future? I guess that should be "Clear" from the appearance of Twilight but Honestly I don't know.
Knife? Where did she get a knife?
Why would she carry the knife in her mouth, she is a unicorn. And also she really shouldn't be able to be understood.
I guess... I am not particularly impressed with this so far? I'm sort of getting a sense for the setting but it is very ungrounded and people are acting in a way that has a lot of recent history coupled with it that you don't appear even to be mentioning. The writing itself has a number of grammatical errors, and, more frustratingly a number of logic and continuity errors. I remain unhooked.