Axis Solaris, brother of Lunaris and son of Celestia, wants to become a knight like his role model, Lightblade. One day, during his training in Ponyville, his sister is reported missing. He has a feeling the quest he is on for Zecora has something to do with it, but is his hunch right?
Lightblade and the White Knights are owned by Ishimura Elite or the FiM Fanon wiki. He is letting me use them for the purpose of this story.
To see further chapters, please go to friendshipismagicfanon.wikia.com and search "Wings of Fire"
Hopefully my problem is fixed for now, I thank quite a few people for pointing it out, and it took me a while to find the time to fix it, seeing as I am mainly here right before school starts.
Let me know about other problems.
Chapters (4)
Go search: "When to make a new paragraph"
I'd check this out before writing anything else, or you're gonna get flamed.
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Ubless you mean the tab button, I have been using paragraphs. I'm not the best writer, of course. Indenting has never been my specialty, so I'll try and work on it.
238395 Indenting doesn't make a paragraph. There's rules that all fics follow. Unfortunately finding guides on this topic can be kind of difficult, that's why I gave you that search term. Seriously, check it out, it's like maybe a couple pages at most.
The big thing you're missing: Only one character can speak in a single paragraph. If you have more than one character speak in a paragraph, you confuse the reader very quickly.
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True, but there are some series, like Eragon, where each character doesn't actually have their own paragraph, as long as the writer notifies of a character change. Thought i am well aware i didn't in this chapter. There is even a spot where i forgot to say it was Lunaris speaking.
Like i said, i'm obviously not the best writer, and will try and work on my skills before posting the next chapter.
Also, i am a bit plagued by this problem. Whever i type b, i, or u, it sets []s around them, as if i wanted to use them for bolds or underlines. is there a way to change this? it is also making me unable to capitalize i's. i was unable to find anything about it.
Fun fact: This is the lowest rated story on the entire site.
3903638 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/11958/the-nightmare-in-ponyville
4037347 Daaaaaaaaamn, something passed it.
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Not a surprise when you read it. By the way, dont.
4041485 Hadn't planned on it.
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no, I believe THIS!
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48890/a-small-part-of-me-wants-to-kill-you
has the worst rating on this website
it's defeinatly the worst I've ever found
4302346 There are much worse stories then that circulating. Much worse...
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prove your claim!
5492393 If you want me to, just be careful because I think I lost a few brain cells on these...
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/189846/a-haze-in-equestria-2-the-twials-of-love
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/9894/my-little-unicorn-magic-is-believing
...in the first one the main character sucks and in the second one the author sucks (I dont remember who the original author is, you'll have to track him down, he's ridiculous.)
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Faiieesh
*vomits* " oh- oh dear god that was awful
it makes Sonic Boom look like Bioshock
Its just so -*vomits some more*-
jow could anyone write any of that and say
"yup! thats good!"
must , purge soul.,
*pours gasoline on self, and ignites a match
"I DONT WANT TO LIVE ON THIS PLANET ANYMORE!"