I comment for there to be a new chapter.... and now there is a new chapter...
I AM GOD!

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Yes, yes you are good sir!

NOW GET ON THE GROUND AND GIVE ME TWENTY!

OH COME ON!
GOOD STORY!

holy shit!!, it's school days all over again

shit just got scary.............................................

I'm going to be honest, I was laughing like a maniac the entire first part of this chapter. This is easily one of the best stories I've read.(I consider this and Nothing is set in Stone to be the same.)

Oh man this is getting goood!

Time to get to work," I muttered sadistically.

Oh, yum.

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That was beautiful!!

You know it's amazing how love can make you tolerate the weirdest of shit.

Chrysalis. that mare is Chrysalis. I call it now.

2953202 If there is no god then why is she a horse?

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Cause ponys are cool
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That would require Cheese Legs to put far, far more thought into her wedding invasion scheme then she is capable of. It would also require her to have stolen the series bible from the producers, or be capable of seeing the future.

For hells sake, she didn't even know who the sister of the pony she was 'marrying' was, or what Twilight's connection to 'her' was. Thats pretty sloppy work.

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Alex COUGH COUGH Magic resistant COUGH COUGH!!!

I'm so worryed about her.

Zomg part two I must read this later

*sees notification*
My body is so ready for this
Edit: BY CELESTIA'S BEARD THREE PARTS?!?!?!?!!
Stop tormenting me like this!

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Well to be fair, we know that Alex is a magical ground to PONY Magic, Changling Magic may well be an entirely different beast. (Though to be fair I AM arguing this with the author )

I'd also laugh if Cheese Legs entire plan of pretending to be "Whoever Shining Armor finally falls for in this continuity" failed because she stumbled going down the aisle at the rehearsal, before Twilight even shows up to confront her, and fell into Alex. And then got her flank beat by three Alicorns and a dozen members of the royal guard.

"Girls, you've got to listen to me! Sweet Flank McSugarhooves is EVILLLL!"
"We know that already sugar cube, you missed the big fight between her and the three Princesses. But don't worry, ya'all here in time to watch RD and Rarity hit on your brother."
"Wait what?"

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Now that would be funny

So...details. What did you think of the second chapter?

To Be Continued In Part Three

You....dick

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Love you too honey

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This just got weird....

see, this is what happens when you piss of an Alicorn. they will not stop until you are dead

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I know

Is Candace going yandere?
Anyway this chap was CCCCCRRRRAAAAAZZZYYYYYY! I like it!

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Well I thought it was a bit odd that Celestia, who has apparently been going kinda "Creepy Stalker Mom" on the two, wasn't keeping a closer eye on Cadence, even though she more or less knew full well that this would happen sooner or later. Personally, if I was Celestia, I would have taken her aside for a "Mare to Mare" chat about a day or two after Alex and Cadence finally hooked up and warned her: "Ohh by the way, at certain times you may experience intense jealous fits when Alex is threatened or other mares show him affection. You might want to start practicing meditation or something like that, cause otherwise I'm gonna be very disappointed in you."

Still, I suppose Cadance may be getting an up close and personal view of the Fillydelphia Mare's Correctional Facility in the future if she doesn't master her anger. Just remember, don't drop the soap!

(No seriously, do you have any idea how hard it is to avoid falling on slippery shower tiles with hooves?)

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Celestia didn't warn her simply because she believed that Cadance's temperament would prevail and win over the instinct.

Guess she was wrong huh

Welp... Cadence just went bat shit insane. Celestia nearly wiped out half of the Griffon Empire. And let me guess. Luna's Alicorn Instinct caused her to become Nightmare Moon and try to drive the world into eternal night. Cadence is going to hunt down a single mare for kissing her special somepony. I mean, she knew that she was fucked by the raw power shown, don't need to kill the bitch.

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Kill?

Who said anything about killing her?

Not me

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You won't stop pestering me will you?

I feel bad for that mare now... Stupidity, even when fleeting, can have some dire consequences for the offending individual. It just so happens that she pissed off an Alicorn...

2953633 The story said that she was going to kill the mare. You didn't say anything, you typed it.

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Nope

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Thought not.
DECEPTICONS ATTACK!

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Killing someone and "killing" someone is completely different,

You'll see

2953651 OH SHIT!!!! INCEPTION!!!!

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Well to be fair, I said if I was Celestia I'd be doing that. And if I'd just spent a thousand years playing Chessmaster to get my sister redeemed, I'd be taking no chances. Last thing I'd want is for Cadence to accidentally hurt, or god forbid, put Twilight Sparkle in a coma or something when she goes full Super Saiyan.

Hence the bit about "Yeah Cadence, the Canterlot Young Mare's Celestian Association offers free classes on beginner meditation on tuesday evenings. Maybe take a look at picking up a martial art or something too, even if you never need it the self-discipline will help you with other stuff over your several millennia long lifespan."

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Personally, my headcanon is that somehow, one of the Apple Family's ancient ancestors was directly responsible for Luna's little incident a thousand years ago. Or at least was the straw that broke the camels back or something. And Celestia nursed that grudge for all that time, letting her hate fester, watching the descendants of those who wronged her. And then one day a certain band of farmers came and asked her for a land grant to set up an apple farm. And then with a smile on her face, she cheerfully gave them a plot of land directly next to the forest that is not only the single most dangerous area in all of Equestria, but also apparently within walking distance of Hell itself.

I mean sure, you might luck out and escape vengeance just because you happened to die before the Alicorn got around to carrying out its revenge, but your descendants are still around for when the Alicorn decides the time is ripe.

on second thought cadance is pink, a little cheesy alex loves her a little possessive ................. oh shit is yandere XD

yuno gasai pony vercion

hmmm…I kind of wonder Alex can eradicated magic with a single touch…yeah when he find out what Cadence did, oh boy Cadence will meet the full, stent of belong to him…yeah this is has being a VERY bad mare, and Alex in a mixture of fear, disappointment and anger will have for…I mean have a serious talk with her. And her will find out how vulnerable she really is.

Muahahahahaha…

Alex has on occasions like this one, brushed my mane before. I'd normally prefer to do something like this myself...but I'd be lying if I said that it wasn't relaxing. The fact that he actually isn't too bad at it is a plus as well.

"Are you sure you've never done this before Alex?" I asked questioningly.

"Well I don't feel like I have," he replied honestly. "But who knows, maybe I have a little sister or something."

Maybe because Alex had some MLP dolls and brushed their manes constantly?

This chapter was sooo juicy(great job showing the dark side of love) and the HATE, THE RAGE!(I loved it, we have somethings in common my friend.)

I can't wait for the conclusion.

Food for thought, Was it because of the Alicorn Instinct that cause Luna to turn into Nightmare Moon?(And does Nightmare also have THE INSTINCT?)
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Wonderful, beautiful, captivating.... I cannot express myself properly, I must do the thing my instinct tell me, I demand MOAR!

I'm not gonna lie, I laughed so hard during this chapter, but the part that got me the most was this:

"PRINCESS MI AMORE CANDENZA, SHUT THE FUCK UP!"

You'd figure that mare would have more sense than to piss off one of the most powerful beings in the world let alone, said pony being Celestia's niece.

I'd really like to see a [slice of life ] entry into this fic series where Cadance, Alex, Shining, Blueblood (Cadance's cousin or brother) and a few other friends just chill out.

I picture Blueblood being is his goth phase with an obvious dyed mane and tail complaining his life and saying confusing pseudo-philosophical bull shit that makes sense to no one.He meets Alex at high school via walking into him.

Alex: "What's his deal?"

Shining Armor laughed: "That's Blueblood, he's Cadance's [blank]."

Blueblood stopped his tracks and glared at the jock. "My name is Bloodstone Razor-cut for the last time."

"No, it's not!" Shining made his point by chucking a football at the goth and nailing his square in the face.

Next chapter: When Cadence Attacks

Based on your other fics this next chapter can be mild to full blown Taken levels of torture with Cadance as Liam Neeson.

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Hehe Maybe I'll do it sometime.

So details. What did you like, what didn't you?

Give me DETAILS!

I'm going to predict that Cadence somehow makes it so that mare never has anybody ever love her, or prevents anybody from feeling love towards her.

Brilliant! Also, thank you for confirming my theory that Alex and Shining Armor are bros, which means Twilight is a sister to him. I can't wait for Twilight's take on him, since that will mean filly Twilight adorableness.

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I found the whole thing enjoyable. I liked that Cadance forgets that Alex can negate her magic, during her panic in the park.

My only complaint if any is that, I feel that the world of this fic could be fleshed out a bit more with a few other characters and events.

Trust me, there isn't enough bad in this fic to raise any red flags.

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Thanks XD

About the characters. Well they're quite a few more little stories coming out with this universe. Every character will be fleshed out by the time the final one shot comes.

"The Day I Died"- Alexander POV