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Theater Critic

Theater Critic #1 · Jul 14th, 2013 · · ·

Equestrialize

Equestrialize #2 · Jul 15th, 2013 · · ·

I can't say i made it far.
But you do need to have this looked over and woked on.

Seeing as everyone has been so kind and left you tons of feedback instead of just dunking the downvote, i'll say, keep trying, track down the editor group on this site and ask for help.
Keep trying.

Have a good one.

tripleheart